Reviews for Chuck Versus a Normal Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am really glad you decided to just continue writing. Very very intriguing concept. I love it and cant wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic start. I am really looking forward to the next part of this story. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Off to a great start, I kept wondering what the heck was going on, right along with Chuck. Very good premise. Emmitt's comment at the timeclock was great, and I especially liked the comments of Jeff and Lester, completely in character. Hope you don't need too much sleep, cause I might hound you for more chaps! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good start. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the first chapter. Can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great story. I want to read more, I was very confused and you I really beleived that Chuck was in the twilight zone. It is more like he is in the wizard of Oz. Great start I liked the reveal that he was in a coma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very clever start! I thought it would be some kind of dream/alternate universe plot but the fact that he is actually on life support AND having the dream, very interesting. looking forward to see what happens next... Update soon! |