Reviews for Rogue Maneuver
ultima-owner chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
Muggers can be so stupid
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 8/1/2010
Weird names
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Good start
I Hate Allergies chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Lol, what kind of robber says 'resided?'
shadow6116 chapter 8 . 3/14/2009
This is great!
Kaytori chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
I like the plot everyone seems fairly ic but you're writting style leaves alot to be desired, I have no idea what's going on at the end of this chapter. where are they inside or on the street?

You jump from one thing to another with no warning.

Bit of advice on writting to help your readers picture the scene. google show don't tell pic the third link on the list.
Captain Deadpool chapter 2 . 2/9/2009
This fic is very exciting! I read too many fics where the story goes nowhere for whole chapters, and let me tell you that this is a breath of fresh air. This is a really fun read, the site needs more stories like this.