|Reviews for Butterfly|
| DemmCounterfeitBandits chapter 1 . 7/31
awww, that was awesome! i like the writing style and the interaction between the two! you go!
| mylife9 chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
the song is by mariah carey.
so cute. even though the fact that rockman and blues are infatuated with each other is super subtle, because of the super subtleness, it's so obvious they're in love with each other! I loved the part with them on the rooftop under the stars. that's so romantic. thanks for writing this.
| OshunGirl14 chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
This was so truly touching- one of the best Mega(Rock)Man fanfics I've read since I've been here. I love the detail in the story, the environments you paint- everything so excellent. You paint the environment, and in effect, the characters as well.
I was just waiting for Rock to let Blues know what he wanted- I love how you put his evasions in- they were unrelated to the topic but still contributed to the story and characterization. I also like Blues amusement AT his evasions-(what could be the reason behind that reaction- maybe he knows somethings we don't... ;) know he knows?)
Blues is full of coolness, character, authenticity, mystery, (a little hotness), and...win!...EPIC WIN!
Then, on the roof top, I knew it was the last chance that time Rock would have to finally tell him- but then Blues had to go. Yet, Rock's time with his dear brother Blues was not wasted...
absolutely beautiful... when, I first started this comment, I was going to ask for a sequel, because I, like Rock, just had to have my questions answered... but now, I see the way you wrapped up the story... its not unfinished... its just open for us draw our own conclusions- your work is (well) done here. On a scale of 0 (WTF)- 10 (best ever), you get 20. You are truly talented. Keep up the good work. Also, you have just been faved.
| naiyami chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
BEAUTIFUL, UNNERVING, PERFECT! the ending was great. excellent. nthing else can describe this! all the little details in this brief story makes it too short! write more! you made me love blues.
| Namida-san chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
Congratulations yet, again, you have written a beautiful story, I can say it's my favorite Blues and Rock so far. I love the relationship they have as brothers as I state in my own fic, A Heart to Love, Eyes to Cry.
Do you have in mind continuing this fic? Because it's so beautiful one would only think of that.
| moonymonster chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Wow. This is...amazing. I usually hate shonen-ai, but this makes up for every single crappy that-so-could-never-happen fic I've ever been forced to read. This is *truly* amazing. I've never been so impressed, unless it was written by an older person. (something in your writing tells me you're young, though my senses could be way off.)
Anyway...amazing...Very good writing. *_*
Moony Rating: 11.5!
Great job! Well, of course you would get an eleven point five, you've impressed me that much! Great work!
| Koril Dragonic chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
So fluffy! *grins* That was a nice story...
| GurardianStar chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
i think its wonderful! it's a good story. I think your very talented.
| Darktiger chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
Wow...great story. This has completely inspired me to write romance fics. Great work!
| Filljigahasdfawitt chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
This is a beautiful story. Such a beautiful story. Everyone's in perfect character, and you have the seeting and mood so deep. I just love it. _
Of course, now I shall beg you to continue it, even if it is old, it would really be worth while.
| Demon1 chapter 1 . 1/24/2003
... squeak! O_O
AIIIII! (breaks down and bawls like a three-tear-old) Th-This is so... so! So I-don't-know-a-word-for-it! Aaggggh... (snifflesniff)
Blues personality is PERFECTLY described. This is so beautiful, so touching. DAAAAAMN! I'm listening to "All I Wanna Do Is Make Love To You" by Heart, and it does NOT go well with this fic, if you don't want to CRY!
I'm actually NOT going to beg for a sequel! This ended _so_ right, that it's all complete and tied up with a bow, just as it is. (sigh...) ...
... MELANCHOLY! THAT'S the word I was looking for! Hell yeah... :)
| Lauren-sama chapter 1 . 6/12/2002
I read this on Darkness Rising... Such a cute fic! I really liked how you portrayed both characters... A sequel really would be nice, though it would be rude to demand it. ;
| Calypso chapter 1 . 3/28/2002
This was so...CUTE! Adorable! Nice male-bonding between bothers. I thought it was gonna be yaoi, but no, you elude me! Nuts! (j/k)
| Harukami chapter 1 . 3/27/2002
Butterfly, butterfly, they like you better pinned and dried...
This is REALLY good. I can't speak for character(obviously) but it's familial and more and sweet and bitter at the same time, and anytime anyone manages that... that's good in MY books.
*noogies Steph fondly*
| Green Eyes chapter 1 . 3/18/2002
That was just so good... Both Blues and Rock spoke very eloquently and I can't wait to read more. So, sequel, please? Maybe Blues telling the story about the little grey robot?