Reviews for The One Left Behind
Yukiko17 chapter 1 . 3/21
Ow. ¡Quisiera saber que pasará después! Muy bueno. Por favor, continuala. Saludos.
sayume214 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
This feels like a fragment, an incomplete thing. This would actually make a good chapter for a multichapter fic, though.

Engaging narrative.
aroya chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
no sequel..? T.T
Namei chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Absolutely amazing in character development! Thank you so much for posting
lunabloodmoon666 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Wow please update soon this is amazing lol is she passed out or dead :s lol really good :))
shinigamispritz chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Erm... why did she die? great story by the way
SilverRingasaMemory chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
She DID NOT DIE, damn it.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

SHE DID NOT DIE.

She just... fainted due to blood loss.. that's all. Yeah she just fainted and will be alive and kicking once again.. right? Please tell me I'm right.

O_O I don't want a sad ending with Neuro being all alone.. I love him too much TTTT

But your way writing is really something to comment about. It's really good. :')
Bumblebeecamaro38 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Awww, the ending was soo sad T-T

I think it was very well written though, I loved it! :D
iamthewerepire chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Awww that was so... So sad T-T love it
Saissister chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
omg... are you going to continue this at all?
ikkixhyoga chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
hiii ke maravillosa historia cuando leei lo ultimo mi corazon se estremecio mucho pero luego me puse a llorar jajaja pero encerio eres muy bueno escribiendo sigue asi espero leer mas historias tuyas ok cambattene entonces matta ne
sunkissedvampire chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
omg, I'm tearing up, you're good! I'm sad Yako died, but it was still very well written and Neuro's reactions were believible, bla cant spell it.
xXxblacklilyxXx chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
wow, the ending was surprisingly intense wow. 5/5
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
great story. Very interesting and well-written! I really enjoyed it even tho it was a death fic.

just one thing tho, I think hearing is the last to go. It's a teeny tiny issue and obviously does not take away from the greatness of the story
LuvStarWars chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
I feel like crying now... ;_; That was so sad and beautiful, excellent job!
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