Reviews for Stupid Teenage Love Poem
eclipsed heart chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Nicely done. I like it very much.

~eh~
iBanana chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Angsty? Check. "Wuhh"-ful? Check.

Confuzzlement? Check. And you've got gold. :D Sweet, Nathan.
sami chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
crap, absolutly crap can't decribe how rubbish it is
kelseychicago chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
okay that was really good! wowzers! and im sorry that i kinda gave you a less than pleasant review on the ter bortch mpreg story. i didnt get it. i reread it and it made alot more sense. it was good. thank you for listening to me make a complete ass of myself. sry!
carino2 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
*nods* I like it.

It's a little rough at some points, but...you don't really want me to do that here, do you?

(If so, that's why God invented MSN xD)

'Despite all this it may just be possible

(we are impossibilities ourselves, existing only in transit)'
ninjaeatcookie chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
I think it's good, though unexpected. From ter Brocht/Jeb to Fax. It was very well written.
Skye Maxwell chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Nathan doing Fax? -shock-

I really like the science/love combination, it makes sense for them.

"...we exist between fact and science fiction..."

"Despite all this it may just be possible

(we are impossibilities ourselves, existing only in transit)

for us to fall in love..."

"...fit neatly into birdkid-size gaps

I will be the variable for once."

Some of my favorite parts.

I'll get to reading your chapter stories... eventually...

-Skye
lizivy chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
It was good!I liked it!
DZAuthor AKA DZMom chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
haha max admits to liking Fang in charge ... very FAX

much better than Max's poetry in the book ... final warning, was it?

the whole idea of how max would initiate a kiss with fang is something that i examine in unheeded warning, so i liked seeing her rationale here.

can kids raised in crates actually develop normal relationships? a yes makes for a best-selling story; exploring a no would be good literature

what did max say in book 2, confused o.O
Skipp Ryan chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
interesting, I liked it. Good job,
rootlessdream chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
I'm somewhat shocked to see Fax come from you, Nathan. Lol

It's pretty, though. I like it.