|Reviews for Funeral for a Traitor|
| fiendfall chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I like this, it's confidently written and works with the TV series. However, it could easily be made a lot better by following the Golden Rule of Show, Don't Tell. I can't help feeling that there's an awful lot of Tell in this oneshot and not much Show. If you're confused about the difference between them, try to imagine this scene like it would be on TV.
I hope this helps! It's a nice scene all round ]
| Firecracker-SJ chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
I love this story. I wish the show had focused more on their relationship and how it came to be.
| doctors gal1792 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
As usual, you are such a superb writer and you wrote this very well.
Though I will say by the fourth episode I just wanted to go and strangle Angelica...Oh well *sighs sadly*
I'm still depressed by his actual death...that was BS to me...
Love you, love this. As always ;)