Reviews for Problems with the heart
Adorable Kitten chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Sad yet cute
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
A great story. Very well written.
SwimGirl98 chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
i loved it!
twilightocd94 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
LOVE IT !
Brickgirl101 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
aaw
Sushizilla chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
i am not kidding when she said no i was jumping up and down screaming "WHAT THE HELL, BELLA ARE YOU CRAZY!"

then i read how she said yes and laughed at my stupidity love love love love love love it!11
jess squared chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
For a Bella gets sick and must be changed story.. It's cute.

However, you really need a beta reader. :) Your story flows plot wise, but it's really difficult to read. Proper spelling, capitalization, punctuation, spacing, and removal of a/n's inside the story would help immensely.
nightwatchman707 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I really liked it but you need to use grammar and capital letters; maybe split the larger paragraphs into two. As it is its quite difficult to read and I skimmed most of it because of the effort it takes to decipher something with almost no grammar or capitalisation. If you have trouble with that stuff maybe you should ask someone to proofread it for you and correct any mistakes.
booklover15 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
OMG this is 1 of my all time fav fanfictions

u r amazing :D

x
cajun panda chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
I really enjoyed your "first ever fan fiction". Please keep writing.
edmom chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
that was a very good story - well written.
Sylverster chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
its GREAT!