Reviews for Pieces: Release
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Great story! I enjoyed it!
Angel N Darkness chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
you did a good job on this story... i love it...
Kimmeke chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Your writing is amazing!
jaggedcharm chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
I'm not sure I like the second person point of view... however I like the emotion in his thoughts. Where are you going from here?
Panda Slippers chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Youch, that was kind of depressing.
Lenni George chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
This is great! Lines I love: "Drinking isn’t your release, it’s just momentary solace." "There can only be release". Wow.
Arcadya chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Very interesting...

They're together but they're not...

I love that Emily makes the first move :)