|Reviews for The Black Prince|
| ComicLover6333 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
I am sad to find out that you are abandoning this story as the writing style is engaging and I'm in love with this plot line. I would love to see more of this story, but if you feel that it is better to end it and leave the rest up to our imaginations-not to mention less stressful for you-I am willing to respect your wishes as the author.
| thatrandommind chapter 4 . 10/21/2014
Oh my jesus christ, you need to continue this story. And i know you haven't updated for long time but this is gold. Please continue!
| Arcy911913 chapter 4 . 12/27/2010
Wish I was there when your computer caught on fire...
| Ragez chapter 4 . 12/26/2010
You don't just get a great and original idea and just abandon it! You have to finish it!
| Kythryl chapter 3 . 12/15/2010
Hey, I really like this story so far. I hope you keep going with it. It's been very interesting.
| TQ57 chapter 3 . 10/10/2010
I don't have any qualms about a Schenizel/Shirley pairing, although if developed into a running gag of the fic (presumably with his poor understanding of "commoner" social customs) it could prove annoying later on [readers do enjoy a comical break from one's main story time to time, but it will become a source of irritation at some point]. On the other hand, I especially love your new alternate reality take on Code Geass.
A few questions though, since the relatively peaceful setting confuses some plot elements:
Is Lelouch still Zero here?
How are the Black Knights affiliated with everyone else in this fic?
By the end of Ch.3, am I correct in assessing that V.V. w/Geass Assassins are the main threat (because who cares about vanilla insurgents right *smirk*)?
Suzaku's role is drastically different than his canon portrait. What changes have you made to him and how is his relationship with Euphie *heh* different?
For a few last notes, please stop spelling Tokyo incorrectly with a 'w' after the 1st 'o'. Also, if you're going to disallow cursing from reviewers, then I'd like to think it could be taken out of the fic entirely [reference to character dialogue].
| malestromhavoc chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
this is a very good stroy and i like how you are making the reactions beleivable inlike some who just say pronce soandso give japan its freedom and the black knights without Zero cheer and join.
the only thing i am wondering is how did lelouch coonvice Rolo?
| aznblackhowling chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
I'm glad to see that this story is still being updated even irregularly. As long as it is being updated.
I look forward to the next update.
| BlackAutumnPhoenix chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
Can you write a Lelouch x harem? OMG, I want to see that pairing! (XD even if it is considered a pairing)
| VIXXX chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
I much prefer the idea of Lelouch x harem[Kallen, C.C., ,maybe Kaguya, Shirley]
But i could see Shirley geting tricked into one of Milly' mishapps ending in a pairing like with Milly or maybe Nina having comady infused with the pairing
Great Chapter update soon
| TQ57 chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
Enjoyed it. Please update by the end of the year LOL.
| Starburstia chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
yup, good chapter as usual. Thanks for updating. Intresting twist... and Lelouch blowing his stack, lol... Don't think I've even ever imagined that...
| Zhana chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Wow, great chapter, I'm glad to see a continuation to your last story, can't wait for more.
| Infinite Freedom chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
I feel sorry for Lelouch, having to spit himself like that. I would be envious, but I just don't trust C.C. Especially since her one wish was revealed.
| SakuraCa chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Hey, good to see the story continued. Great grammar and the flow of the story felt natural. Only thing that is bothering me is that I feel that Lelouch and Kallen's relationship is developing a too fast rate or rather it is too obvious. A way around that is . letting one person change his/her habit or opinion because of the influence of the significant other. But of course it is up to you.
Great to see that Schneizel is still the old evil plotter. And you even included Li and the eunches in China. In my opinion I think Lelouch is most charming as a leader and general. Just how he brings victories that seem very likely that and he is not only ready to sacrifice to ohers but even himself. I can't wait when the war will China will break out in the story. It seems inevitable.
I'll keep an eye on this work.