|Reviews for Wings and Immortals|
| animal lover13 chapter 25 . 3/20
i love what you have written so far. i know its been a long time since you last updated, but i hope you're able to soon.
| nikolasowa chapter 25 . 7/31/2014
| Someone chapter 25 . 6/21/2013
You have to update!
| LoneVampWolf chapter 25 . 6/21/2013
You need to finish this! It's really good and I love how Bella can fly! This is one of the rare stories that gets my attention, so plzzzzz finish! :)
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 25 . 6/28/2012
Loved the story! You should update it though.
I noticed something. I forget what it's called... You rite words that are words but they aren't the right words even though they're similar. For example, you write latter when you mean later and you write ally when you mean alley.
It seems like things happened a bit too fast. The chapters flow propperlly, but it always seems like Bella's always there at the right time to catch the action. Because of that, the story seems like it's going too fast.
"another" is a word, so you don't have to write "an other".
"Driveway" is also a word, so you don't have to write "drive way".
I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes. You should do spell check, and you should also read over the chapter. It's posted for the world to see, so you should do the best work you can do.
Other than that, loved the story!
Keep up the great work, and PLEASE UPDATE! :) (:
| Saruviasm chapter 12 . 3/26/2012
You should finish
| InuFan21497 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
I would ever so please if you were to continue this story... LOL I can't even write it with a strait face! But please do continue this story.
| Edward's spouse chapter 25 . 5/15/2011
excellent story. cannot wait for more.
| KT9556 chapter 25 . 4/19/2011
OMG, love this story please continue with it. I need to know what happens!
| twilightiskewl chapter 25 . 12/25/2010
i hate cliffys update REALLY soon!
| Somebody chapter 25 . 9/12/2010
This is so awesome! keep on writing(!) it and i love to read new stories!
| gr33t3 chapter 5 . 8/21/2010
my moms best fresnd had a bright blue Ford Focus. totally awsome car.
great story, I like it.
| Amelia Jordan chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Good story, a little convoluted though.
| EsmeraldasDreams chapter 25 . 6/19/2010
yeah u could ask that : what's happening ? but please continue this story :'Dxx
| wretyfguhiwaszx chapter 25 . 3/21/2010
OMG! I love it so much! I need more soon please!