Reviews for Come Undone
Leona Bowman chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Hot!..
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
That was hot! I liked this o/s and Edwards's slow torture!
rhythm junkie chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Short, sweet and impossibly hot - just lovely.
Nisa Cullen chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
umm this is hot
Always-Here-Imani chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Greta Smut. You should def continue this.
lovesux93 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
That was hot lol. I love the Jasper/Edward pairings! Two sexy guys having sex so gets me off lol. :D
BeCullen chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
That was hot.
clairdeluneisgreat chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
love it!
MartialArts Writer chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
You would be the coolest writer ever if you wrote a chapter please please please please please please.
MyriadProBold chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
That's hot.
beautyattempt chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
gahh, you make the best slash ever

plz make more :]]
eeelleira chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
aww...poor jazzy.. :c.. COULD YOU PLEASE MAKE A 2ND CHAPTER! i wanna see how long they last for.. hours? days? weeks?