Reviews for Red
CatLover444 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Very Sweet!11222222222222
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
cute. i also like the whole send yusei out for feminine products :) good test of devotion
Melan Anime chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Aki is a good friend and mother.. RuKa needs a mother...
YuseiFudoRules chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
I need reassurance now. I haven't started yet, so someone tell me it isn't that bad to have periods. I'm panicking over here!
Mage of Hope chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
So kawaii!
DJ Blair chapter 1 . 9/7/2011

Im a girl...

This isn't a boy thing so boys who get in girl stuff so stay out...

Good story...
Comet Rose Star Dragon chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I like your story.
xWellJustMex chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Aw... Ruka and Aki are always so cute together. But since when does Ruka live in the same house as Yusei and Aki? Did I miss something?
Akiza Night chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
That was weard...

MitarashiAnko7077 chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
D'AW! :) Nothing can bring two females together like puberty... Or a lesbian relationship, lol
Neon Majestic chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Hmm. Very nicely done, I dare say. I think you're influencing me to take the plunge and do my own one-shot. .
Desierd friends chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
I thought that some one was gnna die lol
ultimate mayhem chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
It was very sweet to find them in such a mother/daughter type relationship
Luna Moon Godess chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Hey Lucarly! Love this story! So cute and sweet! What a great Mother daughter moment for Aki and Ruka! I hope you're okay with me adding this to my Community Archive.
Kelisidina chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
The plot was very realistic and you captured Ruka's character well.

But if you've noticed, Aki is no longer cold or even the slightest bit sarcastic. Aki's character is off, and she's much more open and caring to people other than Yusei. (ie Martha, USHIO D8 and the children from Satellite) I would suggest studying her character more.

The plotlines for your stories are well thought of and incredibly enjoyable. Elaboration is good and you can easily create images in your readers' minds. But you can be perfect it by capturing Aki's personality and going over the chapters for mispellings. )
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