Reviews for Too Late
Flamy II chapter 1 . 3/31
O.O The sad thing is... I could actually see Dahlia doing stuff like that to Iris as a means of bending her to her will. It's a sad... and scary thought. Poor girl...
Aruraya chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Very nicely done. Chilling, in fact. I don't even like Dahlia, and I felt something that intrigued me about her here. Ooh... *shivers*
Afro7hundr chapter 1 . 9/23/2009

Aw yeah
dukemnukem chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
oh! That was amazing! I actually cried! No, seriously! And this is something that I don't do often! This was very well-written, and the ending, with Iris screaming "I love you" was so beautiful! I really liked this :)
nikki chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
I've never heard of that but it was good
Miss Prince chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I saw this on the Kink Meme. Very well done; heartbreaking, and so in-character for both of them. Tragedy just surrounds these two, doesn't it?
Brandon chapter 1 . 2/6/2009

On a more serious note...all-round great job with the story. I really liked the grim mood.
Logastella Krustallos chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Ahh, excellent. Very in character, nice flow - lovely, dark atmosphere. Wonderful job.