Reviews for Signs of Madness
Blackgate Transfer chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
This is very disturbing. In a good way. The last line made me laugh. Is that bad?
EmeraldDragon93 chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Amazing work. 3
rlsefromtheashes chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Wow...this is brilliantly written. I never thought about it, but it's only natural for von Karma to go insane after 1-4. Having Gant as the narrator was genius, because we get to compare the two convicts' states of mind as they're imprisoned. Again, excellent job.
middle school was a dark time chapter 1 . 2/6/2009

Stop coming up with better thoughts than I do. :c

No, really. Love the character, love the idea. maybe a little more description?
thidwickthebigheartedmoose chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Wow. That is *so* creepy. I've got shivers. (I have a low pain threshold...) That was Gant. These two lines in particular:

"Even I’m not like that. If I’m guilty of any crime, then it is the crime of being an opportunist. I see an opening, any opening at all, no matter how small, and I seize it. Carpe diem." and

"There’s not much to do in here, apart from watch and wait. But sometimes I’m not sure if I’m waiting for my death or his."

And the repeated references to madness tied the story together beautifuly. This was really really good.