Reviews for 家族忠誠: Her Family
agoodcupoftea chapter 6 . 2/18/2009
Oh my freakin' wow! I was listening to Our Lady Peace, "Somewhere Out There" while reading this and it was amazing! You got me hanging!
xoxo Juniebug chapter 5 . 2/17/2009
i like the different POVs

tommy and shinya were totally meant to be friends!

fyi little izumi is kind of mary sueish

.[junie].
agoodcupoftea chapter 5 . 2/14/2009
Yay! More! *claps like a 5-year old watching Hamtaro* _
Sightbent chapter 5 . 2/14/2009
Good chapter. It should be interesting to see how you relate everyones pasts together.
Vanui chapter 5 . 2/14/2009
YAY! Happy stuff at last! Can't wait to see how this Miyako is.
xoxo Juniebug chapter 4 . 2/14/2009
wow this is really good! poor izumi. i would tell you to update soon but then i would be a hypocrite, so in other words, i cant wait for the next chapter

[junie]
agoodcupoftea chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
Oh my God, this is RIGHTEOUS! Ca;i's rubbed off on me,. hehe. So are you..oh weait, Little Izumi's original father...is it TK? And whoi are Izu8mi and JP's partners? I can't WAIT for more!
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
This is a good story. Please continue. Takuya and Izumi forever.
Sightbent chapter 4 . 2/10/2009
Another good chapter. The Takuya/Hikari forming a kind of family is cute, can't wait to see who's all in it.
Vanui chapter 4 . 2/9/2009
Erm, I got a question. Was this an accident?

"Little Izumi entered the house and, after greeting Izumi, ran through an open archway into her playroom."

This was a line near the end of the chapter. I don't think Izumi was in Takuya's house, was she?

I love this so far. I hope you keep going.

Lolz, gangbang? XD

What is Rule 34?
Vanui chapter 3 . 2/9/2009
(jaw drops further)

Now I did NOT see that coming!
Vanui chapter 2 . 2/9/2009
Hmm, excuse my lack of manners but, WTF?

I don't get love at all. Seriously, she likes him, now he likes her, now what? Make a big mess out of it? Always like that ain't it?

Okay, sorry about that. Love little Izumi. Keep it going.
Vanui chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
(jaw drops)

The beginning was so... serious!

And then you really drop the bomb at the end. I don't think it was supposed to be funny, but I laughed for some reason. I guess I'm just a weirdo. :D
Sightbent chapter 3 . 2/8/2009
Good update.
agoodcupoftea chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
Yay, more!
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