Reviews for Aaron and Jonathan: Generation SOLDIER X
Whishes4magic119 chapter 2 . 7/7/2011
All right, so let me get this straight. A meteor sent by someone in the Winx Club Dimension is hurtling towards Earth that is about the size of Mars three years in the past. Jump to January 20th of the present year and two guys, one of which happens to be a Bella Swan, somehow get "showered" with Mako Radiation and get the same abilities that Cloud, Zack and the actual characters get in FF7. The scientists on earth then figure out a way to let these guys jump to another dimension just before earth gets destroyed, and somehow they end up with the best attack magic materia in ff7, and that somehow they wind up using the best limit breaks from ff7? And on top of that, they happen to be in the Season one finale of Winx and manage to know what is attacking the castle? Did I get all that right? If so, I must ask, WHAT ARE YOU SMOKING? What kind of insane drug paraphenalia is running through your brain sir or madam? I mean, yes I can understand that you are a fan of Final Fantasy 7, and that you are a fan of Winx. I get that. But seriously, YOU DO NOT CROSS OVER THE TWO FANDOMS. IT JUST DOESN'T WORK! And I am seriously not trying to wreck on your creativity, but put it to better ends than this please! Also, please for the love of God and the heavens above, don't give your characters god-tier weapons at the start of the story. It doesn't give them room to grow, and it makes you look like a person whose insecure about how strong they are. Seriously, take these things to heart it will help.
Chibi Horsewoman chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
Wow, I believe this is my first time reading a Gary Stu. Which is to say a fanfic where the male character is seemingly too perfect and is brought in with all the qualities that the author possesses or wishes he did possess. Please if you have any respect for writing. Take down this story now