Reviews for Jim, We Shrunk the Helmsman
Sonar chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
That was priceless. Wonder what the rest of the crwe would look like if they were cats.
houdini123 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I definitely enjoyed that. I love stories that are just plain fun. I've written plays- Star Trek and non- that never, ah, materialized, so I can sympathize with you. Thanks for sharing!
Radon65 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
That was hilarious. That was so much fun - it was just so random! I loved the kittens!, and the WTO agent was hysterical and the turtle was amusing and just everything was pretty dang funny. That was great!
Churnok chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
This story should end with a graon from Kirk. I certainly groaned when I finished reading it.

No typos that I saw, though I'm sure writing the way Chekov speaks gave your spellcheck a headache.

An amusing bit of absurdity and, given it's origins, it could have been worse. I'm willing to bet that the few rehearsals you had, never went this well. I think it could be developed a bit more, but you were probably trying to stay as close to the original script as possible.