|Reviews for Death is only the Begining|
| NARUHAREM FOREVA chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
woohoo god-like naruto i love it! i love YOU!...lol jk...at least for the relationship type love, not counting that, i do love you! seeing as i just freaking ADORE godlike naruto stories MUA HAHAHAHA
| WolfbrotherTitan chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
1) In the final meeting with the Captains and Lt.'s Naruto said he'd only been dead about two and a half hours, which seems far to short a time for him to get to soul society, befriend Akane (and deal with an Omeada, even if that isn't so difficult), and do a complete tour (at least meet the Captains) of each division.
2) I presume that the reason everyone is so surprised by Naruto's spiritual pressure is because they don't know about Kyuubi, but shouldn't one of the shinigami have had to perform the shiki fujin sealing it into Naruto? Well, whatever the case I like a strong Naruto, and having several of the hottest girls in Seireitei interested is always nice.
One last thing, shikai and bankai are techniques that increase a shinigami's spiritual pressure beyond its' normal level so just because Naruto is super strong shouldn't mean he can beat up lt.'s and captains, right?
| SilverKnight17 chapter 9 . 4/26/2010
this is good
| omally-dood chapter 3 . 4/15/2010
Momo: no she should go with hitsugaya
Nanao: no she should go with Kyouraku Shunsui
Rukia: maybe... actually yes
Yoruichi: no i always thought she should go with Urahara Kisuke, tho Soifong did love her so it could be a no she angry or a yes cuz i still like u
Nemu: hell yes gust imagine the comedy u could do with her "father" Mayuri kurotsuchi (experiments)
Rangiku: yes that 1 sounds like a good mach
Tatsuki: yes tho the fact she is alive may clash
Nel: no i gust dont like the sound of it
Halibel: no she enemy
Older Yachiru: r u made you chant do that if she grows up then Akane will have 2 2 (no more cute little side kick) also gust imagine what Kenpachi Zaraki will be like (i know it sound funny but u cant let that happen 2 that cute little pink sid kick)
Kuukaku: i thought she hates sole reapers, unless u are gona save her brother
| omally-dood chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
thank god theres another chapter
| omally-dood chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Love it best 1 so far
| Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
| Cleardragonf chapter 9 . 3/21/2010
pretty good but some of the things are happening a little to fast and so maybe you should slow down a little.
| Cleardragonf chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
this is Amazing could do with a little more of a chapter plot thought.
| Skazi chapter 9 . 3/12/2010
Pretty good. Some grammar and spelling eros but it's still some what enjoyable. Can't wait for Nel to show up.
| ragnrock kyuubi chapter 9 . 3/6/2010
great story hope to read more chapters soon
| wolf chapter 9 . 2/12/2010
Very good please continue its really good.
| daniel 29 chapter 9 . 2/11/2010
Yuzu went next. “Destroy, Kuro Ro-Zu Ryuu” (Black Rose Dragon.)
You must have watched Yugioh 5ds to get inspired for this name
| ShadowRyan chapter 9 . 1/31/2010
I like this naruto/bleach story so far. Keep it up. Hope you update soon.
| JJ chapter 3 . 1/23/2010