Reviews for Broken
xXxAllegraxXx chapter 28 . 2/19/2011
Wow, your story is absolutely amazing! One of the best I've read so far. I almost cried my eyes out, when I read the chapter about the funeral...It was deeply moving.

Can hardly wait to find out what the threat is, that's looming in the shadows.

And oh my god, that fight scene was super hot...! What are they about to do?
Nicoconsd chapter 17 . 2/18/2011
I am curious as to why Bella is hunting down Jasper's family. Is it for a DNA sample? And what will they find! :)
Nicoconsd chapter 16 . 2/17/2011
Wow so I wonder if it's Jasper's baby and what is Bella running off to do! :)
Hannah3575 chapter 22 . 2/12/2011
God i have never cried at reading something, as much as i did in that chapter [
Nicoconsd chapter 15 . 2/11/2011
Oh the joys of giving road head :) Jasper is one lucky guy :)

I am curious what is going on with Bella and if she really just has the flu or if it's more...

Oh and what's up with this brother? Is this radom vamp that was capturing her the guy that could be this brother's dad? Looking forward to getting more scoop :)
Nicoconsd chapter 14 . 2/9/2011
Wow so a lot went down this chapter... Alice and Felx, Edward and Minx... I am curious about Edward' attraction to Bella and when will they start talking about her turn and what is this letter all about :)
Nicoconsd chapter 13 . 2/8/2011
Wow she knew he was a vampire! Crazy! :) I can't wait to hear this story :)
Nicoconsd chapter 12 . 2/8/2011
I'm kinda waiting for the bomb to drop... They seem to be doing well but what will happens and will that guy come back even though he realizes she is with a family of vamps?

And then when will they tell her what they are and will they change her soon? :)
Nicoconsd chapter 11 . 2/8/2011
I feel like maybe I missed something... Where did the guy go? Did he know Jasper was coming and took off for now? hmmm

I am glad Bella is excited to go home and am looking forward to seeing how things go once she gets back :)
Nicoconsd chapter 10 . 2/8/2011
Oh wait so she really is being held by a vamp? Wow that makes it interesting as to who it is... I mean I am sure it's James but how did she know him...

Poor Jasper I hope he gets to her and I have a feeling once he does he is gonna have to change her right away :)
Nicoconsd chapter 9 . 2/8/2011
Wow so I can't believe Jasper has been gone for so long and I am so glad everyone wanted to beat the living daylights out of him! I love it when Carlisle gets all angry :)

Poor Bella man the girl can't seem to cut a break... I am curious to see how far things get before Jasper finds her.
Nicoconsd chapter 8 . 2/4/2011
Oh man this is a stubborn pair! I hope this bit away will help them both realize they need each other :)
Nicoconsd chapter 7 . 2/4/2011
I'm liking Jasper's method and I am curious to see if it works... He's a sneaky one :)

They only seem to have a day or so left of the original lockdown but hopefully Carlisle will let them extend... I still say I want to be locked in there with him :)
Nicoconsd chapter 6 . 2/3/2011
Wow so Bella was naughty naughty and gave herself her first orgasm. I am curious to see what her response to that is after she wakes up. :)

And poor Jasper... Good thing he's already dead :)
Nicoconsd chapter 5 . 2/3/2011
Oh damn that was awesome... I mean just standing there watching him? That was super HOT :)

I am really enjoying Bella's responses and thoughts she kinda makes me giggle. :)
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