It was a terrfic story. LOved it! A squel would be awesome! U r a great wirter!

goodnight my rabbit...really

yea ok sure...just keep thinking that

Sequel? Yes? Awesome.

loveeee it! have i read this story before? i think so, but if so then i dont care! i'm reading it again! and i agree, i just read the whole teddy and victoire series by swealsey and those stories are great! but yours are awesome too!

Hi! I love this story. A LOT. Victoire/Teddy is one of the greatest pairings ever, because J.K. Rowling doesn't say much about them so we fanfic writers can create any kind of plot and character development about their relationship!

And you've pulled it off wonderfully :)

Good job on this!

Douce

I love how at the end Dominique is doing the exact same thing! Haha, this is really good.

love your story, this is my second time reading it, love the hide and go seek chapter and i love the way you write and your ideas!

Beautiful start to the story. Your characters seem fun but not perfect. Drama follows I'm sure.

I adore this story! I thought the characters were portrayed really well and from the first chapter I was hooked! I really think you should write a sequel :P

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I love this story so much! I pretty much see it to be canon. It's one of my favourite ffs ever!

haha by werewolfism did you mean lycanthropy? Still loving the story. Shame on you for keeping me up until all hours of the night!

haha I feel like an ass for the French lesson seeing as how a) you can clearly speak French or b) you've asked someone who can! Loved the last chapter, it had me laughing out loud at several points!

I love the way you wrote Madam Pince in this chapter. Hilarious! I hope that the humour continues because you write it really well.

I really enjoyed the first chapter. One thing I noticed, though, is that Fleur calls one of her children (I don't remember which) "mon petite" and I just wanted to say that if she is saying it to her son, it should be "mon petit" and if to one of her daughters it should be "ma petite". All nouns in French have a gender and agreement must be made with adjectives. Not a huge deal, but I thought I'd point it out. The story is great so far, though, and I am looking forward to reading the rest of it!