Reviews for Sometimes It Takes a While
my1alias chapter 27 . 2/15/2010
This story was absolutely BRILLIANT. I really really hope that you're thinking of writing another story, because I think you're phenomenal! Seriously. Thank you for sharing these fantastic stories with us. I absolutely LOVE the characters and story-telling, and this just blended so seamlessly in with JK's work it was almost as if she wrote it herself. I LOVED every minute of it.
Nymph Nif chapter 27 . 2/14/2010
Wow, what an amazing story! it's so... realistic! I mean, I can totally imagine Rowling's version like this!

Loved it, really.
green electric chapter 27 . 2/2/2010
IT'S REALLY EXCELLENT!

Nice story, very good plot, and I love it!

How about another outtakes from this story? I really want details about Dominique and Jake. And truly, I beg it! So please...
Number27 chapter 27 . 1/29/2010
This was quite an amazing story. I stayed up most of the night reading it (until 3am) and as soon as I got up today I read the rest!

The out-takes were excellent as well! I love how Victorie isn't snobby, and she is a bit insecure. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more from you!
Sarah The Ninja chapter 27 . 1/12/2010
Well, it was quite a story, a very interesting one I admit!

It makes me laugh a lot! I've never tried the Teddy/Victoire before.

Only one thing bothered me a little, since I'm French, don't take it personnally, I've seen worse, but err (and I admit, I make mistakes myself too, big ones in english), when someone says "mon chéri" it's for a boy, it's different than "ma chérie" which is for a girl.

Well, I'm just being touchy with our weird grammar anyway...

The other ones seem to be interested, I'll take a look soon.
rachel chapter 4 . 12/3/2009
I LOVE IT! a truly great writer. U rock!
wondergirl9879 chapter 27 . 11/16/2009
Well, I must say that I LOVED your story! It's really difficult to find a good Victoire/Teddy story that has few spelling/grammar errors and has a plot that makes sense. You did an excellent job, and the plot made it so that I wanted to continue reading to the end. Cheers )
BrainsBeforeBeauty chapter 12 . 10/30/2009
Ahh! A jealousy, embarrassment, and love story. My favorite!
desidreams19 chapter 13 . 10/26/2009
Evil, evil, evil child.

You don't let us know why his hair turned pink?

tut, tut.

Although I pretty much know why. (heh)

This is my first Victoire/Teddy fanfic I've read and its great!

Amazing storytelling (:
Sir Stud Muffin chapter 27 . 10/18/2009
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this! I'm now addicted to this pairing. Thanks a lot! Haha

Perfect ending by the way. I loved how you built up to that moment. *sigh* I wish I could think of more to say but all I'm coming up with is "ILOVEDIT!" So I'll just leave it plain and simple. I loved Sometimes It Takes a While. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

-Cay
Bagoosa chapter 27 . 10/12/2009
This is my second favorite Teddy/Victoire, if only because the other one was more angsty. It's a close second, though. Really good, though I could do without the graphic details. Yeah, I know this is rated M, but it's Teddy/Victoire, one of my strongest weeknesses, and it's a darn good one at that.
GirlyGirl chapter 27 . 10/4/2009
Amazing story!
Meum Cerebrum Nocet chapter 10 . 9/27/2009
hehehe she called him her bunny :P

loved the chapter... and the story so far :P
Emily1980 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Okay.

I just finished reading your story and I love it so much I'm going to read it again if I can.

And I usually can't stand doing that.

But this story really was great.
dawnlloyd chapter 27 . 9/6/2009
amazing story!

I really really love it
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