Reviews for Sometimes It Takes a While |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was absolutely BRILLIANT. I really really hope that you're thinking of writing another story, because I think you're phenomenal! Seriously. Thank you for sharing these fantastic stories with us. I absolutely LOVE the characters and story-telling, and this just blended so seamlessly in with JK's work it was almost as if she wrote it herself. I LOVED every minute of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what an amazing story! it's so... realistic! I mean, I can totally imagine Rowling's version like this! Loved it, really. |
![]() ![]() IT'S REALLY EXCELLENT! Nice story, very good plot, and I love it! How about another outtakes from this story? I really want details about Dominique and Jake. And truly, I beg it! So please... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was quite an amazing story. I stayed up most of the night reading it (until 3am) and as soon as I got up today I read the rest! The out-takes were excellent as well! I love how Victorie isn't snobby, and she is a bit insecure. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it was quite a story, a very interesting one I admit! It makes me laugh a lot! I've never tried the Teddy/Victoire before. Only one thing bothered me a little, since I'm French, don't take it personnally, I've seen worse, but err (and I admit, I make mistakes myself too, big ones in english), when someone says "mon chéri" it's for a boy, it's different than "ma chérie" which is for a girl. Well, I'm just being touchy with our weird grammar anyway... The other ones seem to be interested, I'll take a look soon. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! a truly great writer. U rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I must say that I LOVED your story! It's really difficult to find a good Victoire/Teddy story that has few spelling/grammar errors and has a plot that makes sense. You did an excellent job, and the plot made it so that I wanted to continue reading to the end. Cheers ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! A jealousy, embarrassment, and love story. My favorite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evil, evil, evil child. You don't let us know why his hair turned pink? tut, tut. Although I pretty much know why. (heh) This is my first Victoire/Teddy fanfic I've read and its great! Amazing storytelling (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this! I'm now addicted to this pairing. Thanks a lot! Haha Perfect ending by the way. I loved how you built up to that moment. *sigh* I wish I could think of more to say but all I'm coming up with is "ILOVEDIT!" So I'll just leave it plain and simple. I loved Sometimes It Takes a While. Loved it, loved it, loved it. -Cay |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my second favorite Teddy/Victoire, if only because the other one was more angsty. It's a close second, though. Really good, though I could do without the graphic details. Yeah, I know this is rated M, but it's Teddy/Victoire, one of my strongest weeknesses, and it's a darn good one at that. |
![]() ![]() Amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe she called him her bunny :P loved the chapter... and the story so far :P |
![]() ![]() Okay. I just finished reading your story and I love it so much I'm going to read it again if I can. And I usually can't stand doing that. But this story really was great. |
![]() ![]() amazing story! I really really love it |