Reviews for Sometimes It Takes a While |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SHOOT! itz dun! sniff sniff... u wudnt believe, bt i actually slowed down the reading of the last few chpts. I was reading over sentences and taking my goshforsaken time... lol... I really loved this story! it was so good! now, im off to read ur one shot continuations. :D :D :D lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOWZER! hm... so they didnt EXACTLY have sex yet? phew! *wipes brow* thank gosh! cuz i was goin all, 'HEY! THEY DIN EVEN REACH SECOND BASE PROPERLY YET!' n then i read on n i was lik.. "oh... that makes sense."... n once more, i am blabbering on! I saw in ur profile u hav another story abt the "talk" btwn bill n ted n also btwn harry, gin n ted. I so hafta read those after this onez done. lol... newho, once again, im typin more than i shud. Like my sis says, once you get me strtd, i dnt shut up. :D really good chpt! like AWESOME! chpt! hahaha... sry... moving on... lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME CHAPTER! i KNEW ted wasnt a daft idiot! yay! n true love prevails! *pumps arm in air* wo... hm... ok... moving on. :D :D :D this chpt was so good. Ted WAS an idiot. if h din wanna break up with her then he shud hav jst taken her aside frm the very beginning... MEN! argh... lol... newho, I LOVE ur work... lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() TRULY teddyz a prat... a lovable prat, but a prat all the same. Sounds mean, I know, but I loved remus n i STILL thought HE was a prat. Ted's still my fave. Just now, he has a prattish moment. makes him more human. :S he was a tad 2 perfect before. Did i mention that i loved ur writing? lol... lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() *fans myself* wo... hott scene. hahaha... poor ted! my gosh, hez JUST like his dad! lol... same insecuriteies n everything! aw... u wud hav thought he would have enuf of tonks in him 2 fight for love, huh? bt hez still doin better than remus did, neway. at least hez nt telling her "itz over!" n slamming the door n running away, huh? and once again, i cant seem to shut up. lol... yay! she passed her apparation test! wo! wel, it was an awesome chpt! lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() POOR LOUIS! lol... the poor lil clueless idiot... hahaha... nt much teddy/vic in this chpt bt it was stil awesome cuz u built the secondary characters in such a way that when their stories are being told, we're just as interested as when there r ted/vic pieces. kudos 4 dat btw! ur an awesome writer! lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! That was the SWEETEST first date EVR! sniff sniff... :') im feelin sry 4 louis, alothugh i figure he's the ULTIMATE prat if he din reaslise that she liked him BEFORE! i mean, gosh... i like andrew! lol... is that dumb? since u only barely described him? bt really, i do! n jake n dominique r so cute! wenz he gon ask her out ALONE? lol... again, i'l stp typin now... i no, i tlk 2 much. :D lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() *suggestive chuckle*... inappropriate thoughts, eh? hahaha... i loved this chpt! i was just perfect! im so in love with teddy! n i cud so feel for vic wen she had to write the letter. chicken that i am, if it had been left up to me, i was pretending all the parchment n ink in the school had been stolen by aliens. Then HE would have had to write first. :D :D :D ok, again... i'l stop typing now. lol! lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! sniff sniff... shez right, though... what if it DOESNT wrk out? it totally shud though... else i jst cnt believe in happy endings nemre! :'( they're my fave couple EVR! nxt 2 fleur n cill of course. :D awesome chpt! i don evn THINK that the lil idiot wud think she din fancy him.. i mean REALLY, ya no? itz nt like she shoved u away screamin "u perv!" sheesh... ok... i'l stop typin now. :D lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the HECK is going on wit teddy? has he lost his mind? *scoffs* men... idiots... all of them! lol... awesome chpt! lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() *happy little sob*... dude... she LOVES him? not that i know what that feels like (pssh, im only 19) bt still... AW! i love the sis-sis bonding that happend though. Reminds me of my sis. we're polar opposites, i swear, bt we love each other to bits. n that STILL wasnt exactly honest at the end there! lol.. get him a gf? as if. she'd pluch her eyes out! haha... GREAT chpt! lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! rogerz a sweetheart! sniff sniff... n tedz an idiot! lol... ANCIENT RUNES? furreal? i mean gosh, ne idiot can translate french.. bt ancient runes? like REALLY... hahaha awesome chaptr. lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() I STILL WANNA NO WHO THE WITCH WAS! lol... :D :D :D haha... im guessin i'll get to no eventually... bt still! hahaha... this was a gr8 chpt! i wanted to laugh my head off wen he silenced her! lol! if only i cud do that to sum of my friends! hahaha... ok, again, i'l stop typing now. :D lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH... who is she? darn it! i wanna MURDER teddy! ah... hahaha... poor vic! :'( wah... gr8 chpt though! lots of love sHiV |
![]() ![]() ![]() i REALY love this chpt too! hehe... pink, indeed. :D :D :D as if we cnt all figure out wat pink is, huh? hahahah... i love this story! it is by far my fave story on this site n i've been reading for years... lol... lots of love sHiV |