|Reviews for My place|
| sandy chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
Wolfgirl, you are a born story teller! Marvelous job!
I do have one criticism. Now and then you use sound - alike words ... there / their, except /accept, to/too, from /form. It's jarring. Of course your readers can figure out what you mean, but it has interrupted the story and we are 'thrown out of the book.'
There are lots of people willing to be proof readers. I have written over a thousand magazine articles, and have 3 college degrees. My editors still find typos, and I'm grateful for their help.
Light editing will make your stories even better. Go for it!
| NabikiB chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
No, Omegas are Alpha. All of them. They are outside of pack structure. Read Hunting Ground, before you spout nonsense. Anna explained it to Ric, the Italian Pack's Omega.
An Omega is an Alpha who is extremely ZEN.
| NabikiB chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
re: He wondered inside
The word you want is 'wandered'.
i.e.: She stared in wonder v.s. She wandered off.
The two words don't even have the same meaning.
| Maggie chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
I hope I don't sound to harsh but there were a few things that bugged me. In the novels walker's don't have a coyote spirit as well as their own person, they are just themselves. Also Jordan's background sounded a lot like Mercy's. I'm not saying it was bad just that these are things you might want to consider in the future. Good luck, and keep writing!
| Tinkerbell Lasuly chapter 9 . 8/20/2011
I was searching a story with Samuel as main character and i must tell that i really love your story. I like how you describe Sam ans Jordan. I love their relationship and i really wanted to be a chracter in your story.
I was just a little sad because i think their relationship was too fast but with werewolf we don't know how it will end.
Thank you for your wonderfull story. Excuse me if I made fute spelling but English is not my mother tongue. I try to get better gradually.
| Tenshi no Shiine chapter 9 . 8/14/2010
I liked it, it was cute
| 1world-traveler chapter 9 . 7/24/2010
i think it would be really cool if you wrote about cara and she was a walker just like her mom
| Ritu chapter 9 . 7/15/2010
great story :)
if u decide to write abt cara i'd love to read that. The marrok's granddaughter would be interesting to say the least :)
| XxxxxIceQueenxxxxX chapter 9 . 4/10/2010
That was so good!
| soulcaptive chapter 9 . 3/16/2010
Excellent story.I'm so glad to see Sam happy!
| Katherine chapter 9 . 2/6/2010
I love this story!
its got a great ending and i would realling enjoy stories with their kids with bran and charles and the rest of the gang!
| someone chapter 9 . 1/15/2010
so, is Cara a walker?
Your right, Sam would let his daughter get away with anything. At least until she is a teenager, and 'anything' involves boys.
| 1world-traveler chapter 5 . 10/10/2009
please update asap im just dieing here trying out to figure out what happens next (not literally)
| blue-eyedwolf chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
this is so great. i love it. mercy had her happy ending and so should sam. a walker as a mate is great. they sound perfect together. AWESOME!
| Anaea chapter 4 . 4/14/2009
Other that a few spelling/grammatical errors, the story's actually pretty good. _
I give it a 7 for now _~
Wander not wonder
But yeah, I like the plot and the OC's pretty decent so far... we need a bad guy though ;P _ anywho keep up the good work _