|Reviews for The Strength of a Horse|
| Naveed chapter 7 . 6/22
Well written, with sufficient detail fleshed out. It really gives a more detailed feel of what it is like to be a ninja. It doesn't feel rushed.
I find this story totally amazing. What I love about it is there isn't a direct connection between Ranma and the nine-tails. Its very well done. I love this story.
Noticed you haven't been able to update in a while. I hope you can, because THIS is one of those rare stories that are so well written and have so much to offer that I would really like to see finished.
| user51s2r chapter 7 . 5/19
pretty good story. well done!
| user51s2r chapter 6 . 5/19
this chapter, I made so many happy sounds. KICKASS story!
| user51s2r chapter 5 . 5/19
not sure whats going on with the will of fire stuff. I am guessing it's explained in the next few chapters.
| user51s2r chapter 4 . 5/19
This chapter was fucking amazing. I loved the chackra/ki stuff. I love the training stuff. The sexy Anko is hilarious. LOTS of good things in this chapter.
I don't see whats going on with the biju stuff. If I understood correctly, they are trying to make up something, that others will understand, instead of the truth. So fake demon sealing.
anyhow GOOD CHAPTER!
| user51s2r chapter 3 . 5/19
I don't see any plot holes. I like your characterizations. This story is pretty damn good. I am glad you explained stuff at the end of this chapter.
| user51s2r chapter 2 . 5/19
This is much better. I had some concerns that Ranma at this stage in his life/training could be knocked out so easily. I mean he would regularly fight people that had super strength and speed.
ok good chapter. I really liked that Ranma just didn't bow down and not get pissed at the manipulations. I think you also portrayed the Hokage and council correctly.
| user51s2r chapter 1 . 5/19
I was going to complain about a few things in this chapter. But early in chapter 2 my concerns/criticisms were shown to be wrong.
Good start. Great premise. I have not seen Ryoga's skill used like that before. I agree with Ranma being surprised by the ninjutsus.
| Alex2909 chapter 7 . 4/7
like the pairing and how ranma has developed in the shinobi world
| thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 1/1
its a shame this fic wasnt continued, but you end it at a fairly good place
| thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 1/1
well this certainly ends act one with a bang, it wouldnt due for our heroes to have it easy
| thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 1/1
theres a lot of exposition in this chapter, but i suppose its context that needed to be said
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 1/1
it seems like ranma's found his niche, it doesnt matter if you cant do magic in a world of mages. you just have to get damn good at countering those who can
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 1/1
fair point about the respective power levels, no matter how much skill someone has, if they arent willing to do what it takes to win then chances are they wont
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 1/1
nice job setting things up without making it too easy for our heroes