Reviews for Show Me The Way
Debbie Hicks chapter 10 . 8/18/2014
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Chapter 11
While waliking then it happene a Truck slammed tntto me then then Died here then a young looking girl Ran to me and then Suddenly Bit Me very too Hardest then all of my Human memories faded and my new eyes were wilde open then Violently Burst outside of the body then I had a gift a Mental shield to see with sound and noise then a flash of light I could see her biting me then took me away from my corpse bleeding then all the sudden Alice I was a unstable Vampire hissing and growling very too loudest and then spied as very all of the Vulcans my throat was murdering me then all of the sudden I Hunted people as much many and many more and as much many more and tri-bazillions ands using my mental shield and then all of the Sudden Killed them as very all odll of them was out of Control and then Drank their blood as very all of using vernom to combine assnd then all the suden the newspapers reported a unstable vampire on the hunt and still Killing and drinking Blood and a lot of overdosing of blood and we must help her and so the Cullens then the erach bot and then all of the Sudden Gave it a hared good SNAP! The letters said CULLENS MURDERS THE VULCANS BY UNSTABLE VAMPIRES AND BEGAN A NEWBORN ARMY INVADING SEATTLE FOR MORE VULCANS ARE CARNIVOROUS ! Then it was a horrible crime could not control; ourselves and needed a army to feast on their blood were with child suddenly we sighted the Pack I Was Still hissing like a wild but Carnivorous vampire hissing very angry and furious we and them were play-training and play-fighting for real and suddenly Bit them and grant the very all of the expanding Pack with their as all of their both with a Disease of the Werewolf suddenly Infected them as all then all the Sudden a BLAST And we were burned to dearth but tried to escaped then and then suddenly burst free of our bodies and died here then Resurrected as Kindred and Interplanetary Lycans for good you know the law you are punished by us these will go you are no longer Alive then they left us to die here then then Blasted outside and using my senses and wither own then then all the sudden fled from the bodies were taken away from us and their own then each both had children then the Volturi guards as very all of them took the bleeding corpse and suddenly gorged thger eyes and of us and then removed the hearing then the voices horrifying then our new eyes with hearing with new voices they vanished with as all of the bodies their own came too late then they wre gone and then it happened my own eyes were Golden so as their new eyes oh my god we have Golden eyes so are you who killed us the Volturi guard we can adopt kids yes Alice what is it they murdered us after removing their warriors and you cannot return home we deported your things into a second manor and with yours so our new lives began who fled back to see a palace who reentry and it happened with their housesing each as all of it then a Merging happing then a BOOM! Lost our own bodies with their own then as very all of the Internatonial vampires and shifters now lived here then it was too late the each both bodies suddenly their stolen skins and eyes and hearing voices went along then wore black robes and their suits then it was all over their ritual the bodies were drained of blood a lot of it then declared the bodies to be burned it was all over they wre Volturi verisons of us serving them then the bodies were formarlly burned with a alive Irina was a witch cursing and swearing and her own scream of infertity was onto them who could not have children had her Killed with us placed Garrett in charge of her room then with the nomads with the two but our own adopted hybrid children with their own watch the Execution then had them killed with us the families aged too fast but too old and then we were allowed to see them in the summer time but in the wintertime returned but it happened ourselves never lived but died we were the guardians of death from a anime.
Anais chapter 10 . 3/16/2014
Pleaseeee updateeee i loveee this fanfic
kage kitsune 14 chapter 10 . 6/6/2013
Update soon, please.
GurlOnFire97 chapter 10 . 9/3/2012
When are you going to update again?!
bigvamsis chapter 10 . 6/2/2012
Ahhhh love it pleeeeease update soon
DracoDreams-2 chapter 10 . 2/7/2012
Nice storyline Keep up the good work. How will they keep Aro from finding the memories of bella? I can't wait to see and will James and Victoria show up? It might be interesting
Mrs.FayteWhitlock chapter 10 . 1/15/2012
Please write more i like this story :)

Your an excellent writer :)
erythra-selena chapter 10 . 6/1/2011
Hi there!

I really like your story. It is a shame you are not writing anymore, truly...
NatashaK89 chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
I know blind ppl that play soccer they have a beeper in the ball and they follow the sound :)
x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 10 . 12/14/2010
this is really good! :)
MysteryTwiLover058 chapter 10 . 11/26/2010
Damn Aro... Hehe Love it. Can Bella have an problem and she hits her head too hard on something and she regains her sight? By the way I say "and" too many times, just thought I would throw that out for ya.

_ Keep it up!
Fish-in-Bowl chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
lol i said that who ever invented the alarm clock should be stabbed with a pair of rusty scissors and my teacher threatend to write me up for being violent

LOVE the story so far
WootTwilighterAnimeFanWoot chapter 10 . 7/4/2010
Loving the story, continue! Continue! Please! Please please please!
Jaxxyplier chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
...what does OCC mean? great job btw
the 'bella'trix chapter 10 . 12/30/2009
i like it
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