Reviews for Colors
Shubhs chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Me like. _
You sound like a cool person. X)
You forgot 'anyone who remembered enough to be themselves was demoralized, called insane and thrown down again and again and individuality was a thing of the past, only existing on the borderlines and in faint memories' and 'curiousity was called insanity, along with individuality, and innocence was a thing to be ashamed of'. :P :D
I don't think common sense can exist in groups, countries, political parties or anywhere where humans band together to do something. :)
I like your portrayal it was nice. I would like to see some more drabbles up from your side though.
I think I've made it very obvious by now that I've visited your profile already but the sad thing is that this is the only story whose pairing I ship or whose manga or anime I've read/seen. :P
Would you like to continue this story? I mean its COLOURS and they apply to all of the Konoha 12. :)
XP XD _
CHEERS!
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Positveitly chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
So sad...*sobs* Its really good. even though its short, it conveys loads of emotion from TenTen so its really well done.
Karma Killer 11 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
This story was totally different from what I was expecting! I thought it would be just a cutesy, colorful story, but now you've got me feeling rather... caught unaware? I dunno. Definately not what I was expecting, but brilliant! - It was so short, but the way it all worked out in the end, it was perfect. Lovely first story!
that is for me to know chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
the story flowed really well, and even though it was short, it worked and conveyed enough emotion. good job!
ShireWulf chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Very angsty, so true!

Alas for the short life of the shinobi...

Unfortunatly, I can totaly see this happening to them...

Very nicely detailed, I could feel the emotion coming off of my PC screen in waves.
weapon-angel chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
u got me tearin up
StrawberrySmoothie99 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
That was a sad one-shot, it was awesome!

Favouriting :D

The colours are a lot like them, you've written it beautifully (Y)
maravelous chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Ah, story!

This is...wow, no way to describe it, just amazing.

I really love it.

It was sad, the way TenTen went.

Really beautiful.

I can't believe this is your first story, cause it's amazing.

Keep up the good work. :)