|Reviews for McGill|
| hopelessfreakz chapter 23 . 11/29/2016
i need drarry moment hahahaha
| Princess Patterson chapter 23 . 11/4/2016
I simply enjoyed reading your story. It's refreshing to me after reading so many stories on Fanfiction. I like all these characters The McGills family, the Malfoy family and others too.
Can't wait to read the next chapter and next and so on...until you finished this story. Very interesting ...:)
| mumimeanjudy chapter 23 . 11/3/2016
Did you mean that the cancer has to be allowed to reach end stage or did you leave out a negative and it should be so long as the cancer has NOT reached its end stage. The way it is written it seems they can't be cured until they are on the verge of death.
Also great chapter. There is SO much information here that I would almost wish that it had been put out as several smaller chapters over a period of time, since there is a LOT to take in.
Very pleased this story is being continued. Hope we get back to Harry and Draco soon.
| daithi4377 chapter 23 . 11/2/2016
As to your A/N the perfect example is how he bound children's cores...maybe he thought it was a good thing because they were muggleborn, possibly dark but in effect he gave generations of children death sentences without a second thought. That's what makes him evil to me is he is doing this for the Greater Good but whose? Not the children he gave the death sentence to...not the Muggleborns who leave the wizarding world in hate and or sadness because there seemed to be no place for them, not to the dark who were slandered, bullied and abused because they were not the Light he preferred. Then you have the Light who were probably the worse off because each generation was lied to and led to hurt, slander even torture in the name of upholding true Magic...now they are finding out the truth and they are like fish left to flounder on the sand at low tide! Trissie is so cute! The two Muggle detectives have adapted to magic so easily considering they are seeing the not so nice side of it...once they gave had Trissies cooking they aren't going to want to go back to their old fare lol. Daddy Malfoy is on the warpath...let's hope Dumbledore was not stupid enough to dip into the Prince vaults or warpath will turn into a atomic detonation! Oh shite the ICW will be involved...is their an end to what Dumbledore has done to Magick...all for the Greater Good. I'm guessing they don't realize that Grindenwald was Dumbledores liver..possibly fiancée? He is the silver trinket described from earlier isn't he? I pity the poor lawyer that has to represent Dumbledore...he is sooo dead lol! Please please update soon!
| daithi4377 chapter 22 . 11/2/2016
Haha the Queen didn't even blink when she found out she had House Elves working at Buckingham...I wonder if they will have someone like Griphook or maybe Ragnok as the Goblin choice for the advisory team? I get the impression Lucius doesn't like elevators...which is kinda weird since the Ministry elevators actually can go sideways or even diagonally whereas Muggles only vertical lol.
| daithi4377 chapter 21 . 11/2/2016
So Dudley was not the only child Dumbledore tried to murder with his stupid ideas. Twelve possible children he has possibly bound and led to their death for the Greater Good.
| Barbara chapter 23 . 11/2/2016
You need to go over the section about Andreas, Alexander, and Abraham. They get mixed up several times. At the beginning, it seems clear that Andreas is the grandfather and Abraham is the grandson, but later Abraham is looking at his son and grandson. And suddenly Alexander is the one to be teaching Sirius where before it was Abraham. And Andreas keeps referring to his father telling him to do something when talking to Alexander. Now, if he's the grandfather that might make sense, but if he's the grandson, he's telling his father that his father told him to do something- i.e. dad you forgot you told me to xxx. And if Andreas is the grandfather(and patriarch), how is his father telling him to do things, when he's dead?(as otherwise Andreas wouldn't be patriarch) Is it a portrait?
| daithi4377 chapter 20 . 11/2/2016
So Abraxas Malfoy is still alive? Hopefully they can get things straightened out so that Severus is safe and can marry Carmus. Dumbledores ploys and secrets are unravelling faster than the speed of light lol. Too bad they can't get rid of the dark mark itself which would clear out the problem of needing Voldie permission.
| daithi4377 chapter 19 . 11/2/2016
That actually went much better than I thought it would. Everyone I think is healing slowly but still healing. Hopefully next chapter gives a few insights to how everyone concerned thinks about that day. So is ' Simon' a golem for 24 hour period?
| daithi4377 chapter 18 . 11/2/2016
Why do I get the idea that that blue paper on the Headmasters desk has something to do with the investigation letters going out...coincidence that it's the Blacks, Malfoys, Finnegan and Longbottom families getting letters? Carmus's letter to Simon clears some things up regarding Sirius but it doesn't explain how two boys but one body will be in attendance.
| daithi4377 chapter 17 . 11/2/2016
im glad Carmus has stepped in and helped Harry...you know Harry and Dudley are a lot alike...Dudley at this point in time will accept having his magic unbound but fully expects to have it bound after his seventeenth birthday because he will never accept it...Simon knows that he is Harry but wants to stay Simon and do away with Harry..I have a feeling both nay change their minds eventually as they grow up. I notice Sirius never mentioned Dudley lol. Simon and Harry will be there? Either they are going to release the secret to a few or there will be some interesting shenanigans going on at that birthday party? Believe it or not I actually think that Having Harry yell and scream at Sirius just like he did to Severus will be the best thing for Sirius and Harry. Sirius is giving the impression with that letter that okay it's my fault that you were constantly at deaths dor for ten years, abused, starved tormented...but I have apologized so lets get on with being buddy buddy godfather and godson. He is under the illusion that he apologized and all is well...Harry yelling and screaming at him just might wake him up to just how much damage he did to Harry. I think this Birthday will be memorable for Sirius but not in the way he wants. Is the Headmaster going to but his beak into it knowing that Harry will be there?
| daithi4377 chapter 16 . 11/2/2016
So when Siriys gave up Harry that October night he seriously seriously erred and screwed up didn't he...no wonder a lot if people are slow to forgive him and why they are keeping Harry away from him.
| daithi4377 chapter 15 . 11/1/2016
I have a feeling I know what Simons leaf asked...a so agree to. By the loons of it Carmus and Severus do as well. Will Draco explain just what the significance of spending the festival with Simon mean? Go Minerva! Tell him how you really feel about what he has done not only to Harry, the muggleborns but pretty much all magical.
| daithi4377 chapter 14 . 11/1/2016
okay she helped Sirius but why did they repair the blasted portrait? Sirius is getting better and truthfully I actually understand his reaction...but I loved Narcissas even better lol. Dudley us a mystery have they caught him early enough that he can be taught right from wrong? When his magic is unbound will he respond more appropriately it will he continue to see all nagicals as freaks...he must be quite powerful if at fifteen months they already knew he had magic and decided to bind it. It would have had to show up quite a bit before that November first since the agreement was put in place for the Dursleys to take Harry, I wonder though why she didn't demeaned that Harry gave his magic bound at the same time? Are there Horcruxes in this story? Is Harry one? And there we see Ronald the Prat lol.
| daithi4377 chapter 13 . 11/1/2016
Lol neutered the Toad before she could do damage at Hogwarts...I noticed she never actually disagreed or said she would never do that eh? So are they planning on telling Draco and Simon about the ..guessing here...betrothal contract they want to sign at Yule? Hmmm I like the Queens message but how will it be received by everyone. Fudge as well as Dumbledore was slammed in this message I noticed. It will be interesting to see if both Fudge and Dumbledore keep their jobs, if they manage to stay out of custody that is lol.