|Reviews for True Voice|
| queen-at-d-throne chapter 1 . 4/3
| jupimako chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
| lw117149 chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
cute really sweet.
| Black Eye-Patch Pie chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Ahhhhhh Gaanaru is so cute! xxx
| Shiragiku-chaan chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
The end is cute.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
so..damn cute (x)
| Prism-Tea chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Well besides the VERY obvious fact you need to READ YOUR WORK xD the story was nice. Im guessing that either 1) English isnt your first language 2) You dont get a good grade in English Class 3) Your young or 4) Your just to damn lazy to reread and edit your stuff. :P
There where a LOT of mistakes. Wrong words, wrong grammar, wrong puncturation, etc. But ignoring all that the concept was good. My only opinion orientated suggestion is to just finish the story at"Although he liked Naruto's voice the best in bed" and just cut the rest. It didnt really make sence and felt like it was trying to hard to make a complete feeling. :3
| Sebby-chan3000 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
| bloodspikedpen chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
| raineynight chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Love! Seriously, this is amazing!
It was a little odd with all of the ages being different than they normally are, but still really good. .
And now I'm off to bed, because it's six in the morning. ;
| Mantinas chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
This was awesome!
| eun-nao chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
ha ha ha
| SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
It's beautiful. A nice piece about the things hidden behind... The lines.
| WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Awesomesauce...enough said lol :)
| midnight13731 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
:D niiiccceeee - can you tell i'm running out of constructive comments? :D xx