Reviews for Last Dance
Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
This made tears come to my eyes and I don't know why. Probably because of who showed up to the funeral. Not important to anyone but Gibbs.
Alice chapter 4 . 2/13/2009
Oh wow. This story actually made me cry. It was well written, and deeply touching. Thank You.
crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 2/10/2009
You had me crying at Tony's eulogy. this was an excellent story and having Gibbs die had me in tears. And again that eulogy, when Tony spoke of Gibbs being like a father to him was heartbreaking. and then saying he didn't know how the team would go on but would go on with Gibbs spirit...Bravo, to one heck of a story! Sue
shadowgrl94 chapter 4 . 2/10/2009
That made me cry in a good way meaning it was very good in an emotional kind of way.
madjack93 chapter 4 . 2/10/2009
I really like tony's speech but I think the part about Kate was too long.
crokettsgirl chapter 3 . 2/9/2009
Wow, this short chapter was very powerful. Gibbs even dying had to know that the bad guy was taken out and was proud of Tim and thinking of what Tony would say at his funeral...powerfully written..sue
rosie chapter 2 . 2/9/2009
please keep going

cant wait for the next chapters x
moolol chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
that was sad :( Nicelt written though I might add :)
Autumn Dae chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
Good job. A couple things though:

-It took me a while to get that Gibbs had been shot. It could have been a little bit clearer.

-A funeral for an Los Angeles Police Officer brings over a thousand, so a funeral of someone with Gibbs stature and accomplishment would likely be at least that. Just thought you should know. It's a common misconception. :)

-Was the redheaded woman important? Was she the second person who died?

Aside from those couple things though, it was pretty good. Keep up the good work!
crokettsgirl chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
I can't believe Gibb died, and now it's in other's pov...nice touch but so sad Gibbs is dead. Sue
blarney chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
Very emotional and well written story. I like the idea of there being the team's individual take on the circumstances. I can't wait for Tony's speach and feelings.
SA3466996 chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
Like the premise of this. Different points of view for the same event. Can't wait for Gibbs and Tony's versions. Keep 'em coming!
crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
OMG Gibbs is dead? I didn't see that, you did this very well, but it's so sad...but written well...Sue
rosie nicolson chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
i think you should keep going, like do it from all their point of views, its a really good story so far so please keep it going...

Keep it emotional :P

rosie xx
That Cripple Girl chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Aww poor Gibbs i'll miss him :-(