Reviews for Protective Sister
Lilian chapter 6 . 9/9/2015
*rapists not rapers
MaryMary123 chapter 29 . 9/19/2014
I forgot last chapter to say.. What happened to Charlie.. Good story
MaryMary123 chapter 28 . 9/19/2014
nice changes.
MaryMary123 chapter 27 . 9/19/2014
I love changes in the original story. Some so many years later keep repeating it over and over.
MaryMary123 chapter 26 . 9/19/2014
ut oh. I like the idea of Charlie changing.. he needs a family too
MaryMary123 chapter 23 . 9/19/2014
I want to know if Charlie did anything to Jessica for leaving Bella in PA.. I mean that subject just dropped.
MaryMary123 chapter 19 . 9/19/2014
You just can not expect reviews. Some will some wong. You get people reading be kind and they will come.
MaryMary123 chapter 6 . 9/19/2014
why admit to being Jessica. Why no just say they got seperated and you are another school friend giving her a lift..
MaryMary123 chapter 4 . 9/19/2014
This one is old. I am just rereading the better writers older work
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 28 . 4/10/2012
Great story!

Your spelling and grammar were pretty good, there were only a few mistakes. It was really only around chapter 25 that it started going downhill for me. Sure, I love a happy ending, but not everything can be perfect.

It also seems like some of the characters are bipolar. The vulturi are against Bella and Edward in the beginning, but in the end they break their own laws by telling Charlie.

Also, in the graduation (I think they do it in abc order) Isabella comes after Edward, and that's for a few reasons...

I also think you could have described the wedding a bit. Alice must have planned something good!

Also, I was just wondering how Alice could tell what Bella was thinking. I just don't really understand it. Edward is supposed to be the one to read thoughts, but he can't read hers...

Sorry if this is a bit strict... This is probably why nobody wants me as a Beta :(

I really do love your story!

Tarah xXx
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 29 . 10/8/2011
i love rose in this story omg i love the ending but plz make a sequel that would be soooooooooooo cool


nightshadowlife chapter 29 . 4/15/2011
I love this story! Your an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what else you've written!
Soph chapter 29 . 12/27/2009
TaylerMarie chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Natalie chapter 3 . 9/18/2009
It felt like I was reading something Stephenie Meyer wrote. I really liked it.
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