Reviews for Doctor Who
Red Bess Rackham chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
Oh wow... this chapter was GREAT. Lots of tidbits to go on. I really like the way you're slowly and smartly revealing things. There's obviously something major going on that we (the readers) are unaware of just yet.

This is a very original, very cool. Please, more soon, this is excellent!

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 4 . 5/12/2009
I don't have much to say - I really like this, and I'm just going to sound like a broken record saying the same thing every chapter. But this is well-written and extremely interesting. I'm really enjoying it!

I like the characterization you've got going on, b/c it's them, but a slightly different them, like them a few years down the road from where we see them at the end of the blog, which is exactly what you've written. Very well done!

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 3 . 5/12/2009
Hm, I wonder what Hammer is doing with Billy? And I'm curious about Badeau's past as "Heartwrench".

I didn't spot any little errors this chapter. Again, very interesting. I'm excited to read more here (and sad to see only a couple chapters left!)

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 2 . 5/12/2009
Nicely done. Again, very well written and very interesting. I am super intrigued by this story.

Another nitpick: you have "So, Dr. Badeau decides to tread", but since everything else in past tense, this bit of present tense isn't right. It should be, "decided" instead.

Other than that, very cool! Reading on...

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Oh wow, VERY interesting.

One thing: near the end, you have "coming in and taping on his shoulder." and it should be "tapping".

When Billy was rescued I for some reason wondered if it was Hammer, thinking that'd be quite a twist, but dismissed the idea. And then when he Hammer said that he was one who brought him here, I was like, "Oh SNAP!" Lol.

This is very well written and interesting. I must read on quickly...

~Red
Risika Tziporah chapter 5 . 5/6/2009
please update soon
XxXChibiBunniXxX chapter 5 . 4/8/2009
This story is really really great!

Please update soon!
Hikari-Melanie chapter 5 . 4/6/2009
Ha, sweet, so they're cloning for reasons unknown? Or at least splitting up the identities. Pretty kickin' idea, looking forward to more.
A Bibliophile chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
I wonder what the ELE is up to. Whatever it is, It's sure to be villainous.

Thanks for the update!
Donteatacowman chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
Ooh. I wish I understood more but I expect exposition to come my way soon. :) Very excellent; I loved it. Good job and thanks for writing!
funkypartyweasel chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
Holy Crap! For so many reasons! Firstly that you've updated, which is awesome, but mainly cos I did not see any of this coming!(Well that's only 2 reasons but whatever). Are you saying that Billy has been split apart from Dr Horrible and now they're 2 different people? Or am I completely off the mark and now sound like a crazy person...? Not that I expect you to tell me, cos that would ruin it and all. But this chapter was excellent, either way! I love how you jumped between the different scenes; the ones with Professor Normal and Bad Horse were really creepy...and of course I'm looking forward to seeing where Hammer is taking Billy now; maybe the place where Penny was killed or something...Anyway, I really really can't wait for the next chapter, so thanks for writing! :)
Mirajane Scarlet chapter 5 . 4/1/2009
I don't entirely understand what's going on, but I like it! This is going somewhere good, I can tell. Please update this soon!
QueSeraSera chapter 4 . 4/1/2009
Very compelling story ). I can't wait to read more whenever you may have it. And writer's block sucks, I know. I hope you feel better soon. Lol, as if it's like some sort of illness or something. But really- writer's block is about doubting yourself. And from what I've been reading in this story, there's nothing really to be doubting. It's excellent writing. ) Cheers.
Kelly White Peach Lover chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
Will you continue this soon please
doggirlem chapter 4 . 3/14/2009
cool, this is interesting. Keep writing
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