Reviews for Shoe Please
DNAisUnique chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Hi. Good addition to the episode. I agree-there was something missing from the episode. Actually, I'm still a little confused by it. I think it might have worked better as a was too mashed up.

Anyway, back to the fic. That's a totally believable addition. And I can see Sweets being all scared. He actually reminded me of Shaggy from 'Scooby Doo.' I love him 'refusing' to move out of Brennan's way. She'd completely kick his butt...

Good work.
JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
LOL... Sweets is too funny...

lizzywig0791 chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
loved the story and i definitely agree that it should have been in the show.

good job :)
MapleCheerUp chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Haha, nice little scene. I think Sweets was actually my favourite part of this episode...
MadeOfStars chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I love your approach here. You covered the serious emotions and got humor into it too. I did feel very ambivalent about the episode too. I thought his brother was emotionally flat, at least at first, there were big plot holes (they should all be fired for that breach of protocol and arrested for destruction of evidence), and I did not like introducing ghosts into canon... But it did have good moments too. Anyway, back to reviewing your piece... You kept perfect character voice and kept the scene very realistic. Great work!
kaitebug chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I think that was so what happened. It's like wow.

I am sorry if it didn't make sence I am like really sleep deprived right now. Wow I spelt deprived right.

I think?
BnBfanatic chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I agree that this epi was lacking, it was great but should have been a two hour Gravedigger special episode. You are continuing though, right?