Reviews for Girl & This Boy
sue273 chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
This is the most beautiful, loving and tender account of the honeymoon I have read so far. Detailed and totally in character - you have completed an amazing piece of writing. Well done.
his.smouldering.eyes chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
I was hoping to find a story like this! I hated not having all the details of their honeymoon. I'm glad it was written by you. Absolutly brilliant. And the fact that it's midnight sun style is... Ugh! I practically died! Loved it, love you. Please keep it comming!
TwilightSherry chapter 2 . 5/16/2009
This story popped my FF cherry...and what a nice one at that. You did very well at giving what was missing in BD. Very nice lemon. You'd be happy to know that I have gone on to read many more FF's but just started reviewing not long ago, and thought I should come back and let you know that you were the first and now I'm obsessed and loving it...and you did a great job.
slummymummy chapter 2 . 3/19/2009
oh - good story - i love it!
Stuntz-The-Dude chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Phenomenal. Yes, it is a lemon. But i think that Edward's chapter is done quite well. It is a very nice representation, very well thought out. Good job.
Kaytee89 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Best honeymoon scene! Amazing.
sunnyday88 chapter 2 . 2/14/2009
Very sensitive and intriguing writing! Thank you for sharing.
Silkie chapter 2 . 2/13/2009
Fantastic Characterisation. Absolutely brilliant!
TeamJakeBella chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
still great love the edward pov
BRsWife527 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Wow. So sensual, so romantic, so...perfect! ) I love your vision of their honeymoon )
reald355180 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
these have to be the best chapters i have ever read...ever. they were very well written just like meyer herself...i loved how you had both point of views... good job...keep up the mind shocking work!

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TeamJakeBella chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
sexy funny and beautiful
Acts.of.Whimsy chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Super
iluvvikingss chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
OMG i absolutely LOVED IT! i especially liked how you made Edward seem so vunerable...it was awesome! there are no words to describe how great that was... keep it up!
sunnyday88 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Very charming story. I like your writing, how you describe the atmosphere and emotions between E/B, very intense. "I'm otta time" (oasis) fits perfectly - by the way...Keep writing!
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