|Reviews for Spiral|
| Carcilwen Thorned-Rose chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
I love it so far. I want more!
| inuaiko chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
this is awesome! can't wait to read the next chapter! X3
| Lockhart-in-the-Closet chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
This is gonna be good!
| Legal - Assasin 101 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Wow! Good Story! Please Keep Writing!
| Merry Masquerade chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I also got the feeling that Nathan didn't have a split personality - he really WAS enjoying what he did (on some level) but that probably came long after loosing Marni. I got the impression that his love for Shilo was the only thing keeping him from going Repo Man permanently (we saw a little bit of this in "Let the Monster Rise"). I look forward to reading your take on things.
| Zydrate chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Oh, I like this. Though I kind of saw him taking the Repo Man job much sooner after Marni's death, six years may not be too much of a stretch.
Nice characterization, expecially with Rotti. So many people write him off as nothing more than a magnificent bastard, which he is, but he has his reasons. (Though, I don't see him as seeing his children as brats quite yet. Oh well.) Also, good idea not having Nathan dissociate; The thought of the two sides of him as different personalities is interesting, but not very plausable. I can imagine him developing dissociative amnesia long before dissocative identity disorder.
Keep it up.