|Reviews for Kyubed:Shinobi's Revenge on Naruto|
| Googlemo chapter 8 . 3/2
| mass-defect chapter 31 . 2/15
I haven't ever hated a character as much as I hate Ino in this fic. I can't read this anymore. It was good up until Ino, but the combination between her being annoying as fuck, and the ridiculously harsh, practically ROOT ANBU training... you lost me.
| voidblade6 chapter 45 . 2/8
You know I think id like a naruto spinoff where hinata became a vampire hunter.. Perhaps some sort of AU world similar to road to ninja.
| voidblade6 chapter 11 . 2/6
ohhh I sense a narutoXninetails pairing.
| Guest chapter 45 . 1/25
This story was so wonderful to read, but I really have to ask... did you start smoking crack before you wrote this last chapter? cause it seems like you did
| NIGHT3187 chapter 27 . 1/21
I really enjoy this story, but as a little critique I have to admit I am a little tired of all the 'bad guys' ,especially Naruto's opponents, throwing a smoke bomb and getting away. It seems like the last couple of fights have ended like that. I really enjoy how you have written this Naruto hardly anyone focuses on stealth, but what good is stealth if he can no slip in and slip his sword into his opponents anymore. Not to mention every opponent he lets slip away now knows that Naruto specializes in giving them valuable information, I mean why play with Kabuto if he could have taken a powerful traitorous opponent down. This is still a great story though and I think part of my frustration is that I am reading a lot of this in one sitting.
| Shattering chapter 24 . 1/4
Nooo rasengan is exclusive only for Naruto and Konohamaru!
| Radiant Celestial Aura chapter 25 . 12/28/2013
I had been wondering about the "Legendary Sucker" title. Since kitsune are supposed to be extremely lucky it didn't make much since. Anyways I found it hilarious how that was all one huge misunderstanding! :D
| GreyAncient chapter 11 . 12/24/2013
As soon as the rain was mention I knew what the contract was. The ring at the end just confirmed it for me.
| jaelin910 chapter 45 . 12/7/2013
you killed kurenai? I'd gotten used to things being a lot different here than in canon so it comes as a surprise to see her get the short end of the stick like that...at least the 'how' was different, I suppose
| CapnSwashbuckler chapter 10 . 11/21/2013
Hinata's reaction to Naruto is pure comedy gold.
| SeverlyLate chapter 45 . 11/10/2013
Well, i like it. I even reread it now since you have updated. Would be nice if you continue the story.
What I dont like is that this "true ninja" stuff is becoming ever less prominent as the story develops.
Shadow realm is an annoyance really and major annoyance now that vampires are here as well together with exorcism no less. Story becomes fragmented.
In the last chapter Naruto comes off as a douche. There's a failed mission, even report is filed, he is talking to Kiba whose hand was chopped off by team a member to prevent him becoming a vampire for gods sake! And he is too dense to ask what's going on? Really? Just how stupid is that!?
You seem to state that vampires are there for hundreds of years... Nobody knows?
Whats next? Erotic teeny vampire dreams?
Ok, sure it's your story and you write for your own fun, but still...
| WTF chapter 25 . 10/27/2013
Why the fuck is Tsunade giving her necklace to Sakura? Okay, This story is taking a REALLY MAJOR twist, sort of. What about Naruto? That's so unfair! Sakura will eventually get Tsunade's techniques and now she has the rasengan AND necklace?
| weird chapter 24 . 10/27/2013
why is sakura learning the rasengan?
| NickNova chapter 45 . 10/20/2013
Nice to see this back. I know it been a while but i'm still waiting on an update to the Three Saotomes and Rain. Thanks for the update!