|Reviews for Purple Dusk|
| kat1316 chapter 12 . 1/12
| RaawrTastic chapter 2 . 1/12
I really did try to give your story a chance, I really did. The thing is, your grammar and punctuation was so all over the place. PLEASE, put capital letters where they are supposed to go and as soon as another character speaks you start a different line.
I'm sorry if you think this is a flame cause its not. You're story has so much potential and would be easier to read if you fixed those issues.
| Dark Neko 4000 chapter 12 . 12/18/2013
How will bella react to Edward liking Harry than her
What will happen next
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/10/2013
| musme chapter 12 . 6/26/2013
I love it
| Noire Trancy chapter 12 . 6/12/2013
Love your story I hope you post some more soon ;)
| Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow chapter 12 . 5/17/2013
i love it and moreee please i love Harlan! moreeeee!
| Eshi9 chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
I know this is weird to mention.. But Harlan must have a lot of interesting situations with rollerblading and his hair.
| Eshi9 chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
I really like how Harry says he thinks the move will bring them all happiness. That's a cool little bit of foreshadowing to the ECHP stuff.
Harry's dream is interesting... How old is he? xD
A lot of the questions I have will probably be answered in the next few chapters, like Harry's age and if this a non-magic AU and stuff like that, so I'll read on instead of asking xD.
| AmeliaPond1997 chapter 12 . 4/23/2013
| goodguy4u282008 chapter 12 . 4/8/2013
Awesome cant wait for more
| pradpush chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Hi, just read ur fic for the first time today. There are a few things I eanted to criticise. Firstly the story has not shown any evidence of harry potter fanfiction. And no u can't call it an alternaye universe either. I would reclassify it as twilight fanfiction with a new character whom the author seems partial to. Secondly where the hell is the plot? Thirdly, why can't authors actually research before writing. People like u have propagated the idea that a gay guy has to be andogynous and worse, a perennial giggler. Fourthly, please please use simple sentences. Double negatives and bad spelling are the least of ur errors and totally spoil the experience. So there, am done grumbling. Hope ur nect venture is an improvement.
| Kuramaworshiper chapter 12 . 3/29/2013
Plz update soon.
| sarah-rose76646 chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
Is this a story where everyone who isn't in a relationship already turns gay, and/or lusting after Harlan? Colour me gay, eh?
One more thing, I like the plot, whole Harry Potter, son of Charlie Swan thing, but I'm not satisfied with your story's execution. It just doesn't seem realistic to me. No offence.
So, kudos for the plot, and good luck.
| Ceti H. Black chapter 7 . 3/26/2013
I like it but it's a bit OOC that Harlan keeps calling Bella Isabella.