|Reviews for The Perfect Catalyst|
| Brock's Geodude chapter 7 . 2/10
Aw, this is cute. Really well done. Now, I know this fic is old, but I'm going to point this out anyway on the off chance you choose to continue: there's a little contradiction here. You say that Ema has had no romantic experience, then a paragraph or so later imply that she had indeed.
| Lad chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
And I love this friendship family take on my favorite pairing, always did wanted to try writing them in that manner and smoothly moving on to romance.
| Ladyrve chapter 6 . 8/3/2015
Omg please continue, eventhough I doubt Klavier's the kind who sleeps around so carelessly, but yes, Aleksander calling Ema his mama is so thrilling now.
| PiKairiDreaM00n chapter 7 . 7/19/2013
Hahahah! I just love the two. Sadly, I haven't had the privilege to play the actual games, but from reading a lot of other fanfictions, are they not "mortal enemies"? I do like the concept of them being friends though.
Ah.. I know it's been a while since you've updated but are you (hopefully!) going to update?
| jontargs chapter 7 . 4/30/2013
a chapter full of banter omg i'm going to cry i feel a heart complication coming along but oh my god WHERE ARE YOU PLEASE COME BACK IT'S BEEN ALMOST FOUR YEARS I KNOW THIS IS HOPELESS BUT THERE'S A PART OF ME HOPING THAT YOU'LL COME BACK AND UPDATE THIS FANTASTIC STORY
| jontargs chapter 6 . 4/29/2013
"Sweet dreams, Ema! Say "bye bye" to Ema, Aleksander."
Ema bent over so she was just looking into the open car window. "Bye bye, Alex."
A now undisguised Aleksander reached out with his small hand as he attempted to call out to her, "Ma!"
Ema froze in horror.
"Good boy, Aleksander. Bye bye, Ema!"
THE "MA!" CAN MEAN TWO THINGS: HE WAS TRYING TO SAY "EMA!" OR HE WAS TRYING TO SAY "MA!" AS IN MAMA LOOK AT MY HEART
| jontargs chapter 5 . 4/29/2013
HE ALMOST FIGURED OUT ALEX'S IS KLAVIER'S KID GOD BLESS YOU GUMSHOE
| jontargs chapter 4 . 4/29/2013
meekins is such a douche omg bUT THE CHAPTER TITLE I'M CHOKING
| jontargs chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
i have no words but wow this story is great don't leave me hanging
| jontargs chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
what a cutie aww i hope aleksander doesn't grow up to like his dad personality-wise although i can tell he's gonna be mauled by ladies when he's older
| jontargs chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
klavier always use protection dude
| Parkenators chapter 7 . 2/7/2013
Omg plz update! This is so well written and unique, I'd love to see what happens next! PLLLLLEAASSEEEEE!
| Erispeon chapter 7 . 6/26/2012
I love this fic! It's so awesome! Is it going to be Klema?
| kimidoriisan chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
I really love this story. I think it's so well written, and it's great to see the confused, bumbling side of Klavier. I'm a little sad that the story is unfinished, but I truly enjoyed reading all seven chapters of this. I thought the Gumshoe interlude was great by the way! :)
| Jesse Lane chapter 7 . 6/9/2011
This story was really nice! 2 years have passed since the last update, but I would be thrilled if you decided to continue writing this story!