Reviews for Cinderella
officiallyemmett chapter 1 . 11/5/2009


this story was so cute.!

&& i love the song.!
ObseleteAccount chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
aw that was great, i think your one is much better

that song is epic!
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
ugh! i just erased all this that i wrote... i hate when that happens...

ok so anyways i LOVED this story it was so adorable.. can i say AW! haha

but Edward finally got his daughter Dance! D

haha! so this story was so cute.. and Amazing!

ok i just have a question! well another one is there a song in this story too?

haha i love that! its cute!

so again I loved it! and im going to read some of your other storys! D

lizzyvamp1901 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Hey! So sorry but the first condition was that it had to be a one-shot and the second one was that it needed a kiss.

Meaning it does not apply for the contest.

It's really cool, though.
AlexaET chapter 2 . 7/27/2009
Oh I loved this story! It made me cry at the end... so beautiful!

Keep up the good work :D!
Unofficial chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
sorry i took so long! i spent time with my family in the middle of readin this, but i have to say, this was a cute fanfic! i mean, some parts i had flashbacks when i was small and i danced on my dad's shoes dancin to Frank Sinatra, Edward acted like the typical uptight father and i have to say, u have done extremely well, bravo.

Great Fic! hope u write more!

Call-me-Cassandra chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Oh wow. This was a great story. I actually had to stop reading it for a while and come back because I started crying. I started crying about three times. I am studying abroad, and I haven't seen my daddy in three months, and reading this story just made me want to catch a flight home as soon as possible. It definately struck a chord. I always think that the best authors are the ones who make you feel. Good work.
KaceyHunter chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Very Sweet, Loved The Use Of The Song In It, Cute Edward/Renesmee Moments
twilight-is-lovee chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Aw! If you'd capitalized stuff, it would've been perfect. Lol.
I'm in love with the moon chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Why is Renesmee such a jerk?

It's cute though.
twilightcrazyfangirl chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
i think it was a great story, the classic daddy's little girl. it was good.
FreakyVampireChick chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I really like it, was it just one chapter? It was good, nothing was captilized though, you should run back through when you have a chance. Did you make up that song or is it a real song?
JustPressPlay chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I love that song already and u just made it even better! U r an amazing writer so please continue wherever ur inspriation takes u! :)
dallascowboysncountrymusicfan chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
this was great! didn't like the swear word in it, but besides that i loved it! i love this song so much, and it fits perfectly!