|Reviews for U UR Hand|
| belleveloso chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
| Mimozka chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
wow, you weren't kidding about the OOC! It's overall well written, however there are a couple of things that don't add up: First of all, Bella drank her weight in alcohol and then drove her car home. Driving drunk, seriously? I highly doubt that Edward would have let her do this, no matter how OOC he was. Second of all, what is the time frame of this fic? Because if you're following SM's time line and this happens between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn or at the beginning of BD, then Bella is not yet allowed to drink. I get it that most people between 18-21 break that rule, but somehow I don't think that's right. Yeah, sure you wrote in your AN that this is a 18 fic only, but I doubt minors wouldn't read it. doesn't have a 18 filter therefore I could read this fic even if I was 13. That's why I disagree with some of the stuff you wrote...
Don't get me wrong, it was amusing to see a ballsy Bella and I liked the way you sneaked the song into the story. However, the whole drunk driving really bugged me, especially considering who Bella's father is. She should really know better.
have a nice day,
| irishnlove2shop chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
Another great story!
| annaharding chapter 2 . 11/1/2011
Very cute! But she should have slapped the crap out of Tanya!
| JennC32 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
That was so funny! I miss your writing (THTF) so I am going and reading some of your old stuff. This was great!
| emmzac chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
That was good but I would have liked to see the bitch T get a bitch slap or two. If it was me I would have been in her face like there was no tomorrow.
| Twilight44 chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
AAAhhhh! Ugg! Why was he sitting there letting T kiss him?
| Twilight44 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Crap I h ad really wanted to hear his explanation for the Tanya thing. Why was he sitting there? Letting her? Asshat!
| Elara420 chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
WoW! Brilliant! Very well written and great detail. It could have gone on for much longer and I still would have loved it! :)
| RosaBella75 chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
Yeah, I'd be up for round two! *mwhaha*
Delicious! I love the use of the song along with her feminie maipulation to exact her revenge! I hate game playing in RL but had way too much fun going along on this ride to object here! ;D lol
Thanks for writing and sharing!
| RosaBella75 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
*MWAHAHAHAHA!* I LIKE her! :D
| CCBTH chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
BAH! she shouldve punished him or at least give him a taste of his own medicine.. jerk was kissing someone else.. not to mention she shouldve ripped tanya apart..or he shouldve..fuck that shit!.. She wasnt nearly pissed enough.. so she drank a little.. and in the first chapter wasnt she human? So then she had "newborn strenght?" im confused.. either way good story.. wouldve been better if bella wouldve kicked some ass. she needs to be stronger.. i hate when shes a forgiving easliy weakling.
| lynne0731 chapter 2 . 6/24/2010
| xtothey chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
That was hot bb. I can't wait to read a lemon in THTF!
| xtothey chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
lol! This was pretty good.