|Reviews for Lucky Charm|
| Giles C chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Haha. Great job. I love how you balanced dialogue and description, and blended them both to convey really precise character traits... Xander walking out with a bat, and then being a little exasperated and bemused when he realizes what it is... Anya being really squeamish and hissing at the rabbit's foot, and then becoming suddenly interested when she realizes it could be a vengeance sort of thing.
One place where it could improve is to flesh out more substantial paragraphs, with dialogue and action together. And you could be a little bit more subtle with character tags like "ex-demon" or "blonde," both of which kind of rub me the wrong way. But those are small complaints-it's already really well-written and witty.
| Blitz-the-Falling-Blunder chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Hehehe have to watch out for those darned three footed rabbits, huh?
| Patricia de Lioncourt chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
That was hilarious! I loved it! Nice little impaler joke in there too! You had these two very in character! I could actully hear Xander, especially, saying some of those lines. I loved the ending too! It was just a great little piece!