Reviews for Betrayal's Touch
yuiop chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
good chapter, can't wait for the next one, but I would like for you to speed up the time for the story to progress more!
LittleMrsAdams chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
good story :) the end of chapter 15 just screamed 'The GodFather'. will the potters join voldemorts side of the war or will they be neutral? cause right now they seem less than inclined to fight for dumbledore (crazy old codger). looking forward to more :) post soon please! please?
Firehedgehog chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Kit89 chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
This is fantastic! i can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep up the good work!

Sabaku no Sable chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
aww! angel's gift was sweet!
Otspock chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
I like it. Keep up the good work.
Bookwyrm365 chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
I love the story. I think you portrayed an old soul with a child's body and mind well. Is Angelus' middle name Seraph or Orion though? At the beginning of one letter he said it was Orion but he signed it Seraph. Does he have two? Or is one a nickname or what?
ShadowOkamiYokai chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
love this fic, can't wait to read more
skyflyte12 chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
i love your story, and i practically danced when i saw you'd updated it - i kinda thought you weren't gonna. So believe me when i say - thankyou!
Aureleis chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Excellent! This was a very cute chapter, and I'm glad you didn't have Anton kill the poor kitty :,[ Althought the thug still thinks it's dead. Anyways. Good chapter.
Alicia Spinet chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
I hope that one of Harry's mate is near Harry's age. One of them could be charlie, you know? anyway, by till next chapter!
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
I like it! **
BoomboomPOWWWW chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
So we don't get to see what Angelus has for gifts... what about Roselyn? Or is she still a sleep?
Broena chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
I assume you forgot Angelus' gifts.
LilSnowFairy chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
Great chapter! i think it's good, the way you wrote it, but I think you could have written this chapter longer by writing a scene of Christmas at the Potter manor. But it's completely up to you, and this chapter is already quite good. Good job. Keep writing.
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