Reviews for Betrayal's Touch
Aamaya chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
OMG! This is AWESOME! I hope you updat this again soon...
InzanityRulz chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
Vellouette chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Remus, Sirius and Lucius would be my vote for Harry's mates.
Vellouette chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
Keep harry/Angelus an only child. I dislike oc characters, besides it takes the focus off the main characters trying to introduce the new ones.

Who are the choices for his mates besides Remus?
momocolady chapter 2 . 2/10/2009
good chapter, give Harry/Angelus siblings but make sure that all cildren are loved equaly, and given an equal amount of atention as much as posible.
momocolady chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
very good start, I like it
DementedViper chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Intresting update soon
Sinfully Dreaming chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I sense naughtiness can't wait for more
AmandaBurke76 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
please update soon. i look forward to read more soon.
Skadya chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
A good story idea. Hope that you will update soon.
Knyghtshade chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
sounds fun!
spacecatdet chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Interesting. I do hope there will be more.
athenakitty chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
So, Harry got sent to another world? I'm a bit curious about what has happened on his old world. I sort of feel sorry for Harry, having so many mates. Just how many mates are you pairing him to? I do hope that he's a dominate on some of them. I do hope that his old world has suffered a great deal for their stupidity.
abandon account chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
looks interesting. i can't wait till you update again!
justamystery chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
wow! 3 mates thats awesome! thanks cant wait for your next update
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