Reviews for Betrayal's Touch |
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Aamaya chapter 2 . 2/11/2009 OMG! This is AWESOME! I hope you updat this again soon... |
InzanityRulz chapter 2 . 2/11/2009 Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon! |
Vellouette chapter 1 . 2/11/2009 Remus, Sirius and Lucius would be my vote for Harry's mates. |
Vellouette chapter 2 . 2/11/2009 Keep harry/Angelus an only child. I dislike oc characters, besides it takes the focus off the main characters trying to introduce the new ones. Who are the choices for his mates besides Remus? |
momocolady chapter 2 . 2/10/2009 good chapter, give Harry/Angelus siblings but make sure that all cildren are loved equaly, and given an equal amount of atention as much as posible. |
momocolady chapter 1 . 2/10/2009 very good start, I like it |
DementedViper chapter 1 . 2/10/2009 Intresting update soon |
Sinfully Dreaming chapter 1 . 2/9/2009 I sense naughtiness can't wait for more |
AmandaBurke76 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009 please update soon. i look forward to read more soon. |
Skadya chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 A good story idea. Hope that you will update soon. |
Knyghtshade chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 sounds fun! |
spacecatdet chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 Interesting. I do hope there will be more. |
athenakitty chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 So, Harry got sent to another world? I'm a bit curious about what has happened on his old world. I sort of feel sorry for Harry, having so many mates. Just how many mates are you pairing him to? I do hope that he's a dominate on some of them. I do hope that his old world has suffered a great deal for their stupidity. |
abandon account chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 looks interesting. i can't wait till you update again! |
justamystery chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 wow! 3 mates thats awesome! thanks cant wait for your next update |