Reviews for Betrayal's Touch
Queen Reader chapter 28 . 11/23/2016
I love this story but I had begun to think I would never see another chapter. So you can imagine how excited I was when I found this chapter tucked away in my current reading box. I really enjoy the way Angelus is undermining Dumbledore. He's so clever in his schemes and so adorable. I can't wait to find out who all his mates are and see what he accomplishes next.
xXxjohnlockxXx chapter 9 . 11/22/2016
You used two different middle names for Angelus in the letter. Is it supposed to be Orion or Seraph?
DonPJuan chapter 28 . 11/22/2016
keep up the great work.
MsQueenWitch chapter 13 . 11/16/2016
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croaksome3 chapter 28 . 11/15/2016
This is one very interesting story. I read it in one single sitting.
There are some stories with similar storyline to yours but I have to admit not quite as interesting as this.
The story is moving rather slow but that is to be expected and I by no means am complaining, I just wish the romance and building of relationships will occur sooner.
I do understand that the romance will not be happening anytime soon as Angelus is only in first year. Tis just my romantic heart gushing.
Well this is obviously an AU so I wasn't really expecting the characters to be in character, but I like you're take in shaping all the characters and I love every single one of them, well except for the villains that is.
Anyhow I appreciate you sharing this story. Thanks a lot.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Calmzone1 chapter 28 . 11/12/2016
Brilliant! So glad I stumbled across your story. Congratulations on continuing on writing even with life still happening. I appreciate it, but totally understand that RL comes first :)
jujukittychick chapter 28 . 11/9/2016
I'm so happy to see another chapter to this :D and I love that angel has completely turned hogwarts upside down and now has the teachers jumping in to help without them even knowing it. such a great story!

will you by any chance be moving any of your stories over to AO3? I know a lot of authors are crossposting on multiple sites
RiverTheKittyKat chapter 28 . 11/9/2016
I just wanted to say I am really enjoying reading this fic and I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work your doing brilliantly :)
MattKennedy chapter 28 . 11/3/2016
Love how the teachers still don't quite realize what is happening, but are glad for it anyway. :)
Guest chapter 28 . 11/3/2016
More please!
Firehedgehog chapter 28 . 11/1/2016
oh.. nice
Guest01 chapter 28 . 11/1/2016
Exemplary work! Enthralling storyline! Realistic characters! Completely engaging and enrapturing! One of the best works I have read in a long time. Please update soon. I look forward to reading much more of this story! )
moonprincess97524 chapter 28 . 11/1/2016
I love how the teachers made Dumbledore look foolish when they informed him that the club was helping the students do better in class. I do have to wonder WHY Dumbledore feels that the old ways are such a bad thing as he is so old that those things had to have been taught when he was a student so why the change?
charitee chapter 28 . 10/31/2016
I love all of your storys and wish you updated more often even though i understand real life takes precedent .Really update any of your storys and i would be THRILLED!
Faery66 chapter 28 . 10/28/2016
Hope to read more soon.
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