Reviews for Betrayal's Touch
The Nameless God chapter 29 . 10/19/2020
I sincerely wish you would continue this story as I quite enjoyed reading it.
Have a wonderful day and fare thee well.
Sincerely, The Nameless God
WindyReads chapter 9 . 10/14/2020
wasn't it Angelus Seraph Potter? No offence, I am just confused. Was it an autocorrect error in the earlier chapters?
QueenCandyy chapter 2 . 10/14/2020
only child
917brat chapter 4 . 10/10/2020
this is a very interesting story that I had to reread a couple of times just because it is that good and I would honestly love to see what you are going to have happen next as I would so love to read more of this story.
T1962 chapter 29 . 10/1/2020
I am really enjoying this story. Hoping that your Muse visits soon. ;)
anissa.abz chapter 29 . 8/15/2020
J’adore j’ai tellement hâte de voir la suite
Guest chapter 29 . 8/10/2020
Oie, adorei a historia por favor continue
Axeliana chapter 29 . 8/7/2020
j'aime tellement cette histoire, déçu qu'il n'y ai pas de suite :'(
LilyAnnaRose chapter 29 . 8/1/2020
I love the story. I can't wait for the new chapter 2 come out.
laundrysoap chapter 29 . 7/26/2020
i love this fic so so so much
laundrysoap chapter 9 . 7/25/2020
i thought his middle name was something else
ChaoticInscriber chapter 18 . 7/4/2020
I can't help cackling at Dumbles expectation of being able to have the Weasley's manage Angelus - if anything he's been giving off quite the Ravenclaw vibe to anyone who's had a chance to interact with him often. Knowing what the audience does about the little Saviour's plotting he could also get shunted quickly into Slytherin, that plotting feels very Ambitious and so does his intent to show up at Hogwarts solely to **** with Dumbles and keep him off his family's bother.
This is entirely aside from our protagonist's awareness of such machinations and the irritation to be had if he bends to them even slightly.

Also, I know exactly who the would-be professor is and my grin is a bit alarming as a result. I wondered if that would be the path he was considering when he started plotting a future that includes stalking his adoptive baby brother...

This is quite fun.
Black reaper of darkness chapter 29 . 5/28/2020
please update
RavenWolf9212 chapter 29 . 5/22/2020
I love this please update!
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