Reviews for Let's try again
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
please
Person chapter 1 . 1/19
Not the best thing I've ever read in the world I've read worst just why a miscarriage yes you may have not liked happy pregnancy stories but really a miscarriage I'm sorry that you couldn't come up with a better idea for them *sighs* I hope you at least make an alternate one where the baby heart stops beating BUT the doctors help them and the baby heart starts BEATING again
tavi crimsonrose chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
CCCCCCUUUUUtteeeeeee!Da baby bit him smart girl: )
saya rose chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
More plz and a baby boy
unknown chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
please make another chapter, i love this book and you made this in 2009. It's now 2013! I want to see how this book ends, please make another. Though I perfectly understand if it has something to do with school and family problems. Just try your best to make another chapter. pleeeeeeeeeease
itachi.naruto47 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
I think Kaname and Zero have twins but one baby hides for the Machine thinking that they having one baby.
Aikaru chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
They should try again I want to have a boy or twins at least.
sakurayuri89 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Please.. Let them try again.. It hurt me also that zero had miscarriage.. Oh, i feel frust also.. Oh please, let it be a happy ending.. Please update it soon..
FandeYaoi97 chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
J'ai bien adoré ta fic
Mais a la fin Kaname dit "Je vous aime plus." Sa veut dire qu'il l'aime ou il l'aime plu ?
jojophill007 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
WHY !? NoooooooooooooOoooOoooO ... Why miscarraige !? And zero was sooo excited to see it !? Poor baby, poor kaname POOR ZERO! T.T
TDGLover chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Oh my god. I read this at first, and I was like, yah there's going to be another baby and they might look like Zero, and then I got to the part where they saw that the baby died, and I started crying, because I'm an only child and I would have had three sisters by now, except that two of them died when they still were unborn and the other died when she was two years old from pneumonia. Her name was Kimber, and every story I write I always have the main character be a girl named Kimber.
rosaikibu chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
eee...a rather short one though...and sad one as well...

i want them to try again...still hoping for a boy for them and so that Kana gets to see the delivery...pleaseeee
LuanRina chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
So sad and heartbreaking, but still very good and so beautiful. . .*sobs miserably* I hope they'll try again when they both are healed - as much as it is possible after that u_u
XxXJezabelXxX chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
this good! so good that its better than my idea lol i like it but it was so sad for zero to lose their second baby...They should make another one! just saying!:D
ireland chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
awesome! i like how its not a fluff ending.
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