Reviews for Mermaid
volleyballsongbird chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
Please continue, they really aren't enough of these types of stories.
Ban Capall chapter 2 . 2/25/2009
This is a great idea! It is interesting to further explore the idea of the elemental masters in America, and a little more modernly. This is a great start, but I would say that it could use a little more detail. For example, you should add a little more description. Describe the cliffs that the story starts out on, and describe the characters a little bit more. Please add more soon!
CJC chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
I like it so far. I haven't read any of the Elemental Master's series, so I can't comment on similarities or differences. You have a nice, clear writing style that is easy and enjoyable to read.