Reviews for Pop
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Wow. I think I need a cigarette after reading that, and I don't even smoke. :P

Fuckin' love it.
tiger002 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I never know quite what to expect from your stories, except they will be different than I'd expect. Your prose eligently paints this setting, dark, bleak, and the constant burning in the background echoes through the piece. The part when they killed the pokemon was really sad, but came as no surprise with the darkness of this piece. I feel like I should know which pokemon DJ is, but I don't. Great stroy, you should publish more sometime.
Darth Meanie chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Well, this is interesting. Nice opening chapter. A few grammatical errors, but your prose is solid.