Reviews for Foolish
the girl by the downtown caffe chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I personally love platonic love stories, but this one captivated me deeply. Hikaru is really a charming character.

But, in my oppinion, I belive there's still so much juice left in the story. So manny things that could still be said. So manny feelings left untoached. Like a wonderful writter I admire deeply said, your story is still like a single toast, when it has the pottencial to be a esquisit pasta. Keep writting.

Oh, and please excuse my spelling mistakes. I ussually don't get along with typing nor spelling.

Love, me.
hitsugaya07 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
I cried...

it's sad... just reading and knowing that Hikaru's heart is slowly breaking...

added to that, while I'm reading this fic I was listening to Ne-Yo's Go On Girl! and that song really reminds me of Hikaru and Haruhi's relationship... that made me cry more...

this fic is so sad...

I hope you could write another one but a more happy one... where Hikaru and Haruhi end up together... some story that has nothing to do with the current manga... I'm too depressed to hear that Hikaru doesn't stand a chance!

it's as if all his efforts are useless... T_T
ashez2ashes chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Yeah, I liked this pairing too... I blame the anime, which made everything seem more even between Hikaru/Haruhi and Tamaki/Haruhi... Oh well.
Melancholic Marshmallow chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Aw, really sad. ( Yeah, I too always end up backing the losing team when it comes to 'ships. HikaruxHaruhi is the cutest pairing ever. Awesome fic. )