|Reviews for Simplicity in Motions|
| Ranuel chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
So sweet! The ending hits right in the heart.
| feisu-chan chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
"must run in the family" omg, i fangirl'd in this line! Thank you for making this story. Too bad it was only now that I've read it. Thank you for making me squee like a crazy highschooler who fell in love the first time. Thank you! it was beautiful!
| Kluddle chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
So cute! 3 This fanfiction completely gave me the chicken soup fuzzy feeling! :D
| everfire chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
The ending line really does make this fic. PERFECT. Still my favorite part was the very first potion. It was very canon, and it made my breath catch just a little.
| TXJ chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
| Spiegel chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Oh, that last line. Very good.
| BryansT factor chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
This is very, very good. They are so awkward and uncomfortable,
which is far more realistic than most fanfictions.
It made me a bit uncomfortable that Touya is being a bit of an arse,
but when thinking about it, that is probably very very true of him.
I especially liked the end, best fanfic I've read in a while.
| Ms. Ely Sium chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Make more. XD
| victoria85 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
This was really cute! and they are always in character!
the way you describe the kisses and caresses is very good! I loved reading this X3
| mochiusagi chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
| Sakura Sango chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Aw so sweet! And I love this pairing too! Beautiful job with this story! Thank you for writing it!
| jessica499499 chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Very sweet!There's so little of this pairing these days!Hope you write more soon!
| burgundy eyes chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
your one-shot is short and sweet!
i had to reread the end twice to actually understand. yes, i'm kinda slow. great story.
| ILikeToDie chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I thought it was very sweet but slightly lacking TILL I got to the end...with the whole sacrifice thing and e I dun no...it just made me smile and squel...well done! Great story 5*