Reviews for Harmony Net
Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15
Another long Hinata story!
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Kou Keehl chapter 2 . 4/8/2014
I think Sasuke doesn't like sweets...
hyuugalove chapter 25 . 12/24/2013
Loved it! sooo emotional
SurrenderingXDemonicXAngel chapter 25 . 11/7/2013
please tell me the story isnt over there has to be a sequel or something right?
kandita chapter 16 . 6/25/2013
Itachi is on the move...what exactly happened between him n Sasuke? How did it get to this? And what is he scheming? Poor Hinata, I hope Sasuke will seek help before its too late
kandita chapter 14 . 6/25/2013
I like the way they interacted in this chapter...it's romantic but open in a getting to know u more sort of way
kandita chapter 11 . 6/25/2013
Reading ur a/n I honestly don't see why u'd write it to make her have to choose between brothers being that she's with the younger Uchiha. And, to not believe him would be like a slap in Sasuke face. I mean u r his woman after all have some faith in ur man
Kerreh chapter 25 . 5/29/2013
man i was looking forward to seeing what sasuke actually did to itachi. ik it was hinted at but it's vague. ;_; brilliant and wonderful story tho', loved each moment
Guest chapter 5 . 8/21/2012
This had such great potential but the pacing isn't very good.

Just Last chapter Sasuke and Hinata went on their first date...which wasn't even written.

And the next one he's completely changed his anti-female ways and holds her affectionately against him as she sleeps in his apartment.

Right there are 5 chapters worth of development that were skipped altogether.
NQ72 chapter 25 . 3/25/2012
*eyes burning with fire* that was so...kawaii desu~

for a 13year old damn you can right! *im 12 :D*

SUCH A GOOD STORY!

-NQ72xxxx
Chidoriii chapter 25 . 2/6/2012
Just a piece of advice, try not to make the things too detailed, like the way you tell what each character is wearing. You don't need to mention EVERYTIME the things the people wear. You're just being too specific, and it's slighty annoying and confusing. It doesn't make the story look any better, it just makes my head hurt. But other than that, nice story. I liked it except the fact that other characters were too OC. But don't worry, I still liked it. I wouldn't have spent hours reading this if I didn't. So keep up the good work and try to take my advice. :)
evilsugarnazioverlord chapter 25 . 10/29/2011
I seriously loved this! I read most of this last night because I could just not stop reading! You are an amazing author!
Niu Shiy-Ue chapter 25 . 5/15/2011
What the hell? Your ending has no conclusion! What happened with Itachi? Why was Sasuke gone for all those months? What was the outcome of his bet with Naruto?

That's not an ending, that's an 'got-bored-and-abandoned-the-story' chapter!
ShyShinobi chapter 19 . 1/23/2011
I remember you saying in one of your author's notes that you were only 13 (yes, I read author's notes). Should a 13 year old really be writing scenes like this. . .?

Anyway, I like the story, but when you skip scenes, you should try putting in the bar thingies (I'm not sure what they're called) or something to show that there was a time skip/setting change. It gets confusing when you randomly switch a scene without any warning.

Just some constructive critism. I hope it helps somewhere along the way! 3
xDarakuxShitaxTenshix chapter 25 . 12/16/2010
AWWWWWWW I loved this so much!
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